please update more, its a really good stort

So have you abandoned this story?

Idiots! How could they not find it suspicious that Victoria didn’t let them talk to Renesmee? And why the hell didn’t the Quileutes kill Victoria? Can’t they do anything right? And hasn’t Sam ever heard of loopholes? The treaty doesn’t even apply to Renesmee because she’s not even a vampire, she’s a Hybrid (a loophole).

I don’t get why Edward didn’t simply kill Irina himself, she definitely deserved it.

Bella’s shield is just as useless against Alice’s visions as it is against Benjamin’s elemental abilities. Sorry, but it makes no sense for Alice to be unable to see Bella.

k - got Mia answered but now what's happened to Charlie (he just sort of disappeared! Did the big, bad wolves eat him? lol).

W-o-W! What a chapter!

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Oh, I liked this chapter (I really hate the stories where Charlie is left thinking Bella is dead). The last section is great! (Go Charlie!)

What happened to Mia? I can't imagine that neither Bella nor Ren would even inquire about her whereabouts given she was a sister/aunt to them for 5 years (and stayed loyal even during captivity).

*feeling very confused!* - it said in an earlier chapter Demetri went back and left a message for Ren in case she returned. :/

re: your top author's note...
I agree about the wolves' arrogance. It always drove me nuts while reading the books (and later in fanfics) how overconfident and boastful they were but especially how they thought they could dictate to the Cullens. Truly they have NO idea just how ill equipped they are to fight more than just one or two vampires at a time (and those usually taken by surprise). The wolves have a fatal flaw that gives the vampires an enormous advantage... ONE BITE, that is all it would take... one quick nip from a vampire and the wolf is a goner (even if not immediately so). Of course, they also have a beating heart and cannot be put back together again. Nor do they have any extra 'gifts' beyond the pack mind (something I'd think would be as much of a hindrance as a help since causing great pain to one wolf means they all feel it).
Having said that, I also acknowledge that the wolves (most of whom are teenagers - arrogance in extreme) have a VERY limited experience base. Most of them have not ventured far from their reservation. They are relying upon stories passed down through the years, so they probably had no real idea how vulnerable they actually would be against a large group of vampires (had Bella not been there, they'd have learned when the Volturi came, of course. Caius, Alec and Jane would have made sure of that!). One thing that always bugged me was how the heck the wolves would have ever known about some of the stuff (like when Jacob tells Edward, "you'll kill her!" when he learns about their honeymoon plans). [I was asking the same question during the scene with Sam last chapter (how would he know anything about immortal children?) along with pointing out his idiocy on not hearing her heartbeat, detecting her scent, seeing the flush of her cheeks, etc.].

I don't know how you had this chapter in your head, but I'd say it came out just right if it was meant to be emotionally wrenching (I bawled all through it). - I did get a kick out of guessing how the secret would be reveal long before it happened (back when she first arrived I thought about how she had learned to play it). :)

Will you continue this in another story? Really hope so.

This was a very good story!

Ok story