Poor Rincewind. But I do like your depiction of him; it seems quite accurate. Even the apologizing as he removes the remains of the demon from his face and robe.

Loved it. Spot On. Keep up the good work.

Very Dungeon Dimension-ish, as far as I've ever been able to imagine them. Good job on tackling what he was doing when he was just an eldritch apparition running screaming through the UU's bathrooms ;)

great,but where is this going?keep with it.

A nice piece of work, very Pratchett :) I love the line about "perils, travails, and Twoflower". Not enough Rincewind-fic out there, so thanks for posting yours! It was a pleasure to read.