| Reviews for Them |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2019 You wanted criticism and here it is: This is RUBBISH! But I still like the story. Gave you both. Btw I am looking for a sex partner... if you don't mind. |
 YummY-FrencH-65 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017 Last FIVE? |
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 4/29/2015 Oh dear god |
| sweetteatwo chapter 1 . 12/27/2014 Enjoyed the story just wished it was longer. I would have liked to see Harry's reaction. |
| phantomlady13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 are this don't have sequel ? |
| Vaydric chapter 1 . 8/7/2012 I didn't like the way you used *this* instead of italics, *this* looks unprofessional and a bit amateur. Other than that, very enjoyable! |
| WriteAtNight chapter 1 . 4/22/2012 Very cute :) loved it |
| Hi chapter 1 . 7/29/2011 Loved it :) |
| Ann chapter 1 . 8/19/2010 Okay, so I thought this was so good. I like how you kept what it was till the end, it was kind of climatic. I really like your writing style, it is very much like my own. |
| stacerswanson chapter 1 . 7/8/2010 This was really short, but I enjoyed it very much. A story doesn't have to be long to be good. :) |
| cersedshadow chapter 1 . 3/25/2010 this is good, nice little onshot. you should try writting a whole harry draco Mpreg fanfic, i'de like to see how it turns out. oh, well, just wanted to say nice story, bye. |
| Becoming-Obsessed chapter 1 . 3/11/2010 -squeals- Haha!~ -AMLF |
| NK chapter 1 . 7/17/2009 Aww. That was just adorable. |
| Ms. Marauder-Cullen chapter 1 . 5/17/2009 Thehehe! That was funny! Loved it! Loved the end and the part with the toothpaste! |
| hizeme-neko chapter 1 . 4/6/2008 that was good writing i do say but there wasnt anything in it... u could have at least told us what it said... jees so yea... some more of this would be nice.. -Hizeme- |
