| Reviews for When I wasn't looking |
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beth626 chapter 24 . 5/2/2017 Loving this! And I'm glad that you are bringing major events of the show into your story, it's making it easier to follow. Looking forward to more :) :) :) |
mjf2468 chapter 24 . 4/22/2017 Ugg! Why oh why a cliffie now that I'm caught up? Sigh. I first thought Slade was going to do a massacre in the restaurant. Now I have to wait to find out what's he planning. |
mjf2468 chapter 23 . 4/22/2017 What a messed up family tree for Oliver! So are we going to find out why Malcolm had the DNA test done? |
mjf2468 chapter 22 . 4/22/2017 Oooh. I don't like the sound of that! |
mjf2468 chapter 21 . 4/22/2017 Oooh ooooh ooh. My two most fav villains working together! How delicious! Can't wait to read more! |
Guest chapter 19 . 3/27/2017 Sad to hear u are removing the last few chapters. I liked baby and how you had Mira come around. The only thing I had issue with was Malcolm's obsession with Emma. It doesn't fit his character but that could easily be brought to an end. |
highlander348 chapter 19 . 3/22/2017 Yeah I agree it was getting to confusing. I hope Emma gets more involved with the action though in the revamp. She seemed like a damsel in distress in the last few chapters. Why can't she be stronger like Laurel or Helena? Even just a little bit? |
dhnysports88 chapter 23 . 3/21/2017 officially lost me for this story |
highlander348 chapter 21 . 3/20/2017 I am confused. Doesn't Emma know that Malcolm was behind the death of her baby? Does she not care? Can you explain this apparent plot hole to me? |
kindleflame5 chapter 20 . 3/19/2017 I had a request please. Can Emma seeks revenge on Malcolm herself? She definitely deserves revenge for this terrible atrocity that happened to her. |
WinterRain36 chapter 17 . 3/17/2017 Very nice chapter! |
highlander348 chapter 15 . 3/16/2017 This was sad. :( |
highlander348 chapter 13 . 3/13/2017 I hate Malcolm! Emma should have slapped him! |
kindleflame5 chapter 12 . 3/12/2017 Good chapter! Yeah the press are like vultures. Nothing gets by them. Lol Can you show a scene or two of just Emma and Thea talking and getting to know one another? Maybe even hanging out together? Just us girls if you get my drift. Tootles! |
WinterRain36 chapter 11 . 3/7/2017 I am rooting for their impromptu marriage. About time Oliver got tied down. :) |