Reviews for When I wasn't looking
beth626 chapter 24 . 5/2/2017
Loving this! And I'm glad that you are bringing major events of the show into your story, it's making it easier to follow. Looking forward to more :) :) :)
mjf2468 chapter 24 . 4/22/2017
Ugg! Why oh why a cliffie now that I'm caught up? Sigh. I first thought Slade was going to do a massacre in the restaurant. Now I have to wait to find out what's he planning.
mjf2468 chapter 23 . 4/22/2017
What a messed up family tree for Oliver! So are we going to find out why Malcolm had the DNA test done?
mjf2468 chapter 22 . 4/22/2017
Oooh. I don't like the sound of that!
mjf2468 chapter 21 . 4/22/2017
Oooh ooooh ooh. My two most fav villains working together! How delicious! Can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 19 . 3/27/2017
Sad to hear u are removing the last few chapters. I liked baby and how you had Mira come around. The only thing I had issue with was Malcolm's obsession with Emma. It doesn't fit his character but that could easily be brought to an end.
highlander348 chapter 19 . 3/22/2017
Yeah I agree it was getting to confusing. I hope Emma gets more involved with the action though in the revamp. She seemed like a damsel in distress in the last few chapters. Why can't she be stronger like Laurel or Helena? Even just a little bit?
dhnysports88 chapter 23 . 3/21/2017
officially lost me for this story
highlander348 chapter 21 . 3/20/2017
I am confused. Doesn't Emma know that Malcolm was behind the death of her baby? Does she not care? Can you explain this apparent plot hole to me?
kindleflame5 chapter 20 . 3/19/2017
I had a request please. Can Emma seeks revenge on Malcolm herself? She definitely deserves revenge for this terrible atrocity that happened to her.
WinterRain36 chapter 17 . 3/17/2017
Very nice chapter!
highlander348 chapter 15 . 3/16/2017
This was sad. :(
highlander348 chapter 13 . 3/13/2017
I hate Malcolm! Emma should have slapped him!
kindleflame5 chapter 12 . 3/12/2017
Good chapter! Yeah the press are like vultures. Nothing gets by them. Lol
Can you show a scene or two of just Emma and Thea talking and getting to know one another? Maybe even hanging out together? Just us girls if you get my drift.
Tootles!
WinterRain36 chapter 11 . 3/7/2017
I am rooting for their impromptu marriage. About time Oliver got tied down. :)
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