Reviews for Great War of the Roses
Cipher32 chapter 1 . 10/1/2019
I just started and already know Barker would be a badass
Mailm4n chapter 3 . 5/4/2018
Can't wait for more.
grifman275 chapter 3 . 1/12/2018
I'm interested how much stopping power Ruby's sniper has against armored targets. That thing is at least as strong as a 50 cal.

It would be also be funny to see Ruby punch a normal human. Even if she isn't the strongest in Remnant, she is still strong enough to whip her scythe around like a toothpick.
Celestia's Paladin chapter 3 . 1/6/2018
First off, welcome to the hallowed ranks Brother. May I be one of the first on this site to congratulate you for attaining Eagle.

So no issue with the delay, real life take priority. Pretty good chapter though, worth the wait
Sharkdude5 chapter 3 . 1/6/2018
Great Chapter!
Hisan Sadness chapter 2 . 7/12/2017
Is Ruby gonna become a squad leader sometime in the later storyline? I love how captain baker is. Hope to see more
Maverick058 chapter 2 . 7/12/2017
When you mention the rifles looking old, it comes off as a little confusing given who the narrator is. At the time it felt like the Cpt. was the narrator at the time so for him to refer to what was at the time the top of the line kit old, it feels a little off.

Also, these guys are army, they went to basic training. Boot camp is something that the Marines have. It wouldn't be too accurate to refer to training as Boot for soldiers.

So far, I'm glad you decided to expand from this being a one shot to an actual story. I wish you the best of skill and keep up the good work.
Hisan Sadness chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
So cool when's the next chapter
Gundam Emperor00 chapter 1 . 7/8/2017
Wow, a mix between RWBY and World War Two!? What a creative and interesting idea, I'd like to see this story in the form of a full fanfic.
Celestia's Paladin chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
Realistically speaking Ruby would probably have been sent to one of the ships waiting off the coast before heading to London, but there is great chaos in war and she might have had time to be sent away. But she is under the protective fire of Texas and Arkansas, and Barker seems to be a good guy.

Still no matter what Ruby will not return home unscathed.
hirshja chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Oh wow, you do a fantastic job of just throwing us into the fire. Haha

Really though, I would love to see more of this, perhaps with the occasional peek into Remnant.
Roach99 chapter 1 . 2/23/2017
I like it! More please!
Anon chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
FULL story please
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
I'm loving this wave of RWBY characters being thrown into our world wars fics. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
Please continue! I love the idea of Ruby actually being in a war located on Earth. This will open up her eyes to the destructiveness of war and might actually prepare her for the battle in Beacon. I must ask though of how her disapperance might affect the timeline in the RWBYverse. Is there a time difference?
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