I might have read all of this till now, around 2 am in the morning... I'm screwed later today. I might also have cried a little, I love this story so much! I find your story freaking hilarious! I can't, they are so good together, you really made them stand out to me. I literally couldn't stop reading till I was done. Thank you so much for all your hard work, I really appreciate it. Thank you for making me smile in these trying times, I hope that everything is well and good with you *heart*

There's several ways magic could enhance her physically. Ritual magic for one, human transfiguration (transfiguring her muscles to be more powerful, like copying an animal's for example) and body enchanting. Like her tattoo shield but designed to strengthen and enhance her phsycial stats. Put on either her skin or carved into her bones. Or both. Or rediscover how to be a metamorphmagus then she can alter her muscles and body as she wants and never has to worry about getting tired.

You could really use a bit of editing tbh, just to trim your fic a bit. The constant tangents in between dialogue was brutal to read and ruins the flow of your story. They don’t really offer anything but recycled thoughts.

You’ve been writing this fic since 2017, and you have improved since then, but eh could be better. Its a shame, I like post-Voldemort HP xovers.

Easily my fav fanfic atm, reread it as soon as I finished it and the 1st time and I am curious as hell to find out what her 3rd form is (perhaps thestral/gryphon). That and the longass chapters area godsend, looking forward to chapter 7 keep up the good work :)

I really like your story and have been enjoying reading it. You are really good at describing things but I think you go a bit overboard at times. You cover the same information several times and go off in tangents describing some things that arent really nessisary in my opinion. Still like the story tho and will continue to read it.

Fantastic!

I love every little detail you have packed into this. I love how you write the characters, especially Kakashi and Hari. This is one of those stories that bundles everything I could have asked of it into it and I can’t thank you enough for writing it. I can’t fault you for taking so long due to the pure quality and length of chapters - take your time, inspiration is fleeting, and I also thank you for the promise to never abandon this. Hari is going to melt whenever she gets to meet Kakashi’s dogs, I’m excited (as I am for everything in this fic actually). Thank you again for writing and all the work you put into this! You deserve so much more attention and love.

So good! Cant wait for new update!

Interesting. and good plot development.

Also, for advice, how about give Harri some Familiar? I mean, sure she still miss Hedwig, but if in mission or long run, she need some Ninja slash Familiar Animal...

Hey, I was just thinking since Hari can’t bow to anyone how does she handle a hippogryff?

So nice for a new chapter! Thank you so much and I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I do live this pairing and have to laugh at them for how oblivious they are. Is Tanzo going to be a watcher? Is he ok after the garden from hell experience? Will be waiting for more.

Love this story and can't wait to read more

I'm still waiting for her to meet Naruto... but I really enjoy what I have read so far. Looking forward to reading more.

great story. hope you continue

This fic was so good, I love the Fem Harry and Kakashi pairings. And I really love the dynamic that you’ve put in place, it’s so wholesome