Read this story, on SilverDaye’s recommendation - magnificent writing, but please, we need some more after that cliff-hanger!

Oh my gosh , you know that you can't leave the story hanging any longer, please please... I may sound desperate and that's only because I am... this is such an amazing story! Please continue,. It deserves that...you deserve that. . All the work that you've put into it... it is amazing! Thank you for such a unique and different Luke and Vader story, I love the complexity of it all. Very well done!

I can tell how much time you spend on your chapters, I know that you put a lot of detail into how you write and it really shows, and I want to thank you for that and this excellent story, you've done a beautiful job with it!

Wow that was a fun read. left it on a clifhanger though! I hope you continue this soon.

Noooooo! Vader, save him!

Scared for Luke, but I also really want Vader to watch that Huttese soap. I laughed so much imagining it.

Absolutely love this story, your Vader is so fantastically written I'm excited to see how this story will continue. :)

Very interesting story I will be anxiously awaiting the next update

I don't know where to start with this review. Your story is compelling. There are so many perspectives and subplots; I can already smell the intrigue and complications that are coming. Vader and Luke are both acting like themselves. The other POVs have added to the story. Piett is delightful.

I admit the frequent italics and boldface got annoying, but I didn't notice them in this chapter, so maybe somebody else mentioned that they are distracting too.

The story has a very serious tone for the most part, but the line several chapters ago that Luke would have attended military school from the age of three "with bonus mandatory training in the Dark Side" made me chuckle heartily. I'm eagerly anticipating more of this story.

Fantastic story and great characterization! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Okay, love this delightful story. I hope you will continue updating. It’s going in a fascinating direction and the secondary characters and settings are on point. Thank you!

Love their interactions. :)

I laughed at Palpatine’s assessment of Vader’s “it’s actually worse”. Interesting new world for Luke, great descriptions.

Nice setup!

Good to know this story wasn't abandoned. I love that you get the characters right. Will the force scream at Vader to kill jaba when he see's that Lea is a sex slave?

Also since Ashoka is alive will she try to get in contact with Luke in someway? I mean the last she would want is her formers masters son turning to the dark side.