That. Was. Awesome. Just like... Wow. I'm so excited for the next chapter! (Less excited about the long breaks in between but... Still! This was epic! ) I... I just... I don't have any words. Just... You're wonderful. I hope you have a nice day/night/whenever it is. This put me in an amazing mood! Can't wait for the next chapter! (I'll try to, I really will.) Have a nice night(That's when I'm writing this reveiw anyway, if you're reading it during the day then I hope you have a nice day to.) :)

Yay! Thanks for a glimpse of the other mages too. What a scavenger hunt. heh. Here's to him finding the truth(es). Thanks for the update!

D You're awesome. So a few hundred years after Yami gets his memories back, will we get to see Yugi accidently give himself green hair? That's not important for now. Anyway, I'm super excited about seeing the other mages and the rest of the chapter, and the whole update in general. As I said you're awesome. Hope you have a nice day:)

Whew, I got shivers! The new chapter did not dissapoint!

Noice! Yeah I’m sure atem would’ve had a hard time keeping upw with that act, anyone would really... well, kinda hehehe. Great chapter :)

Are we gonna see what the rest of the mages are up to soon? I miss them(Even though it's only been a few chapters) You're epic! Like seriously epic! Can't wait for the next update:) Though... I am kind of confused about how this is a game right now-unless maybe originally there weren't any traitors in the palace? I don't know but I can't wait to find out! Wait! I just thought of something. So, are the mages going to be searching the puzzle until Yami's coronation and that's when they make it out? Or are they gonna make it out when Yami's still a child when he'll be subject to Bakura and Marik's taunting? Probably Setos too. Anyway, you're amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter.:D

I get so excited when I see these updates that maybe I need to re-think my life a little. I am really loving this arc and I really enjoyed how you wrote this chapter historical inaccuracies or no. I especially love how Atem is developing relationships all over again with the people that he’s forgotten and how upset he is over having to pretend, it really humanizes him.

I loved it, I hope the next chapter

This series is one of the ones I go back and reread sometimes.
I have only one complaint about this chapter: It ended right as I was really settling in to enjoy the update. I do like that Yami is getting to spend time with his father, unlike in canon Memory World. I also like how you dealt with people addressing him, with the buzzing/asterisks. The sub version was amusing (Could you... say my name? / Huh? Prince is Prince!) and I don't remember how the dub handled it, but your method was more... realistic is a close enough word, I guess. You also gave readers a chance to pick up on what was going on before you addressed it directly. :)
God bless,
Scae

Impressive speed. Are you on lockdown too? Hope you retain sanity...what there was of it. _~

I loved it, I hope the next chapter

I love it. You have an amazing creative mind. Update soon and can you forgive me? Please PM me back. Thanks.

I loved it, I hope the next chapter

Can’t wait for more this is good!,

I loved it, I hope the next chapter