story about mc without fucking mc

Nice chapter

I'm sorry to say that i'm quickly loosing interest in your story. Beginning was quite nice, but god you used as plot device is never mentioned again. In Rudeus extreme hatred of human god, it seems impossible that he would trust some unknown god on the first meeting. Besides that rest of chapters 1-4 was nice. Than 5 happened. I tried but i just don't care about this characters. Its not an original fiction and those are mob characters. So i read half of 5.1 and stopped reading since. I was quite excited about chapter 6 but this whole chapter is about Paul, and suddenly i no longer care. Ill try few more chapters but this fic seams to have a lot of wool and not a lot of meat. Good luck to you.

Wow, it's back from the dead. Hurray! Time to reread from the start. Thanks for another chapter Kaocakeman.

The most beautiful fanfic I've ever read. It satisfied the yearning i had for future rudy to live happy again. I've only read the first chapter, but beautifully written and I've been beautifully touched by the interactions with the past and elements of self realization.

Overall as of date, the story started off really strong. Once it was time for the delivery arc, things started getting messy. It felt as if two different stories were being put into one. Chapter 5.5 really feels too long to be delivered in one grand chunk.

The amount of fighting in this chapter was too high relative to the amount of plot. That said, it was still a pretty okay chapter.

Wow, not even five chapters and the MC is already dumped

Wow, cuckold right off the bat

What a let down. After that epic ch1 you drop down to useless theory

God of XXXX. God of Porn? Oh wow, this must have some epic harem.

its good

I was surprised when I saw that mushoku tensei even had a section on this site. I got my hopes up for this story but in the end it was just dissapointing.

You are a great writer though, your writing style is really good its just that filler is not tolerated for fanfictions.

You will however find success in writing independent stories.

Oh boy, it's going to be raining OCs. I'm not sure if I'm interested in reading OCs doing important stuffs. You're probably going to make things happen behind the scene since Rudeus is too young to be involved in anything. It's going to make things extremely boring.

Uh oh, you are not one of those of authors that like to info dump but forget to advance the plot, are you?