Reviews for The Fall of the Underground
Guest chapter 7 . 7/22/2018
More please
Guest chapter 7 . 2/7/2018
good story
Guest chapter 7 . 2/3/2018
This story is great!
We definitely need more only bill cipher crossovers
Junior VB chapter 6 . 8/6/2017
No está mal.
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Not bad.
Thoth chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
I guess you could say...

~It's the Final Countdown!

Do Do Doo Do
Chimp chapter 6 . 3/23/2017
I guess you could say...

~Its The Final Countdown!~

do do DO dooo
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Kinda reminded me of the song deCipher.
'Count me in when~confidence is all you lack'

Alphys isnt fat, she...just has thick scales. Yeah, definitely.
EmNm chapter 4 . 2/27/2017
Don't worry about it dood, we didnt need need to see Frisk adventure, woulda just been filler.

Also, I immediety thought of the song DeCipher when Alphys suddenly got confident.
I like what im seeing.

P.S. Alphys isnt fat you soulless monster, she just... Has thick scales.
WanderFan1208 chapter 2 . 2/20/2017
Oh my god this is amazing! Please continue!
TheWritersMind chapter 2 . 2/20/2017
Finally, another undertale fic to feature the almighty meat dorito.
Not entirely sure how I feel about the setting, kinda wanted to see chara and frisk. But im sure you can play it well.
A little advice, space out the paragraphs more (about 3-5 sentences per)
It will make it a tad easier to read. (I read on mobile)
As long as you play Bill like the pychopath that he is, I will be satisfied.

So far, so good, keep it up.