| Reviews for The Fall of the Underground |
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Guest chapter 7 . 7/22/2018 More please |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/7/2018 good story |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/3/2018 This story is great! We definitely need more only bill cipher crossovers |
Junior VB chapter 6 . 8/6/2017 No está mal. - Not bad. |
Thoth chapter 1 . 3/25/2017 I guess you could say... ~It's the Final Countdown! Do Do Doo Do |
Chimp chapter 6 . 3/23/2017 I guess you could say... ~Its The Final Countdown!~ do do DO dooo |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2017 Kinda reminded me of the song deCipher. 'Count me in when~confidence is all you lack' Alphys isnt fat, she...just has thick scales. Yeah, definitely. |
EmNm chapter 4 . 2/27/2017 Don't worry about it dood, we didnt need need to see Frisk adventure, woulda just been filler. Also, I immediety thought of the song DeCipher when Alphys suddenly got confident. I like what im seeing. P.S. Alphys isnt fat you soulless monster, she just... Has thick scales. |
WanderFan1208 chapter 2 . 2/20/2017 Oh my god this is amazing! Please continue! |
TheWritersMind chapter 2 . 2/20/2017 Finally, another undertale fic to feature the almighty meat dorito. Not entirely sure how I feel about the setting, kinda wanted to see chara and frisk. But im sure you can play it well. A little advice, space out the paragraphs more (about 3-5 sentences per) It will make it a tad easier to read. (I read on mobile) As long as you play Bill like the pychopath that he is, I will be satisfied. So far, so good, keep it up. |