| Reviews for Our Paths Ever Crossed |
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Riba Nyabom chapter 4 . 11/11/2019 Looking forward to future chapters. |
Riba Nyabom chapter 3 . 11/11/2019 Beautifully written. |
Riba Nyabom chapter 2 . 11/11/2019 Lovely chapter. |
Riba Nyabom chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Lovely start. |
WarKnyte chapter 4 . 9/15/2019 Great chapter. I was excited when I saw it updated. I like how it is building too but still a sweet love story. |
Shadowkragg chapter 4 . 9/13/2019 Really enjoying this so far, keep up the great work. |
linx007 chapter 4 . 9/13/2019 As far as I'm concerned your back and thats all that matters. Preaching to the choir about work so good luck |
Jose19 chapter 3 . 3/5/2019 This completely unlike Kaze no Stigma because it is not set in the modern world but in Naruto’s world which confuses me. |
Jose19 chapter 2 . 3/5/2019 The question in this state is Kazuya present in this story since he is the undisputed Wind user of the series along with the Princess of the Fire Clan. |
Jose19 chapter 1 . 3/5/2019 This is interesting because Kaze no Stigma has no chakra concept because this particular power enables to use multiple elements, which is impossible for modern users. The aspect I like about the Elemental style of Kaze no Stigma is being a contractor, and having the blessing of their King. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/21/2018 Wow, I haven't read a fanfic this good in forever. I can't tell specifically what it is but the story feels alive a vibrant in an amazing way. :) |
ThatOneGuyUpstairs chapter 3 . 8/18/2018 Okay, so, do the summon’s still exist? Are they still secluded in there little hidden parts of the world, does at least the supernatural community know about them? And how is this new age of chakra thing working, people other than Shinobi used it, did they all get quietly shut down as well? Also, if this is really a case of Naruto (the show/manga) having taking hundreds of years ago in this planets past, why didn’t any other society discover it, based on certain legends and stories there are places where things like that popped up (magic and superhuman feats done by hero’s of myth for example, or for a more direct example, Nordic Runes possibly being a Scandinavian version of Seals), and here’s the big question, in Naruto, it’s clearly shown time and again that Chakra, despite having some aspect that seem mystical, has a biological component, the secondary circulatory system of with all the chakra points, all the kekkai genkai, etc... Meaning someone would probably find it when looking at the human body, either when disecting the average persons corpse, or when looking at DNA from older bodies and wondering why there was all this DNA that seemed to indicate peopled from these specific families would develop extra nerves in there’s eyes for seemingly no reason, or this others family that had DNA that seems like it would mean a person would be able to actually House insects in there bodies, I can believe that maybe any clan would insist on cremation to the point, but even average citizens from non Shinobi families had chakra systems, is it just something modern scientists know about but don’t know the reason for, like how humans now a days have organs we don’t really use, but scientist theorize that they were originally meant for the processing of uncooked meats? If that’s the case I have to wonder what they thinks the chakra circulatory system was used for, and also what they think about the eight gates. Not trying to bash here, it’s honestly a very interesting story concept, and I knit just saying that because I’m a fan of reincarnation stories where a person’s precious life palys a large role in there new lives instead of it just being some random god saying “boom-you’re-in-another-world-go-do-stuff-to-amuse-me” *coughfartoomanyisekaistoriestonamecough*. I really want to see where you go with this, it’s just I feel that some things here have to be addressed in greater detail. |
insanemaelstorm chapter 3 . 4/29/2018 Nice chapter. Love the interaction between Naruto and hinata. Love how she has been portrayed. Like how everyone lived out their lives and the end of the shinobi era. Can't wait to read more |
bladetri chapter 3 . 4/28/2018 like XD |
HurZysn chapter 1 . 4/28/2018 great chapter looking forward to more |