| Reviews for The Maelstrom of House Baratheon |
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RoundLake chapter 15 . 6/24 I hate harem shit, and this is harem shit no matter what you say about this. Daenarys marries a khaal, gets 3 dragons, abolish slavery, finds herself a loyal army (also burns down a city out of spite). Naruto: I am the son of your father's killer. Give everything up, marry me and become my sub-ordinate wife. Daenarys: Okay sure. |
Mister LaGuardia chapter 4 . 6/8 This is probably one of the most annoying types of fabric for me; reincarnated character with no recognizable character traits of his past life except powers that make him entirely OP in his new one. I feel this would have been a better story of you just had Roberts son (whose not a crossover) get some sort of powerset. Also, the Tyrells would have had no connection to the Throne through Olenna as she wasn't a Tyrell UNTIL she threw away her betrothal. I generally enjoy your stories but this one doesn't feel fully thought out. |
LoganLiet chapter 3 . 5/12 dude, you need to put a new sentence after and before the loooooooong dialogue, not with, knowing, etc. besides the arc need a break after talking too many words lmao. |
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 15 . 5/10 I really liked his story. I wish that if you could continue with the Sefiro Naruto and other similar stories, or if you can also do more of Game of thrones Naruto, we would appreciate it a lot of people. |
Kaiimei chapter 1 . 5/8 I mean, that's definitely one way to make an entrance. Pretty major power-trip, and to be honest? I'm not complaining even slightly. A Naruto raised in Essos with a Valyrian Katana, powers that no other wields, and a claim to the Iron Throne stronger than any other? ...It's stronger than Jon or Dany's claims because Robert took the Throne by right of conquest. They used to own it, but the true Heir, unless he's been disowned entirely, is Naruto, since Joffrey is a bastard, a Waters, as are Tommen and Myrcella. His claim is strongest by far, and he has the strength to back it up. |
Obstrocity chapter 1 . 4/19 LOL never mind, them sending him to Essos is all three strikes immediately. I'm out |
Obstrocity chapter 1 . 4/19 Well Cersei's hate for him is super forced, that's a strike against this story and its only chapter one. Let's see how this progresses. |
halo4hire chapter 15 . 4/16 Honestly, I've been avoiding this fic as I'm not a huge GoT fan (mostly cause I have kinemortophobia and the BBEG made what I fear), so I felt I couldn't do a very good job of giving this story a review. Now having read this story, I kind wish there was more to it, like towards the end there wasnt enough character interaction. Not saying there wasnt any, just more. The conclusion wrapped up a lot of loose threads and ended the story well enough, but it was the fact it ended that left me wanting. The fight with the nightking was anticlimactic, but then when your over prepared, any fight is anticlimactic, like being maxed level with the ultimate gear fighting Melbu Frahma in LoD or shido from p5. My point is, I'm just frustrated this incredible story is so short. |
miguelgiuliano.co chapter 5 . 3/26 Genial capitulo espero por otra historia como esta. Espero una historia de Percy&GoT, con Percy y los demás semidioses tal vez como creadores de su propia nación. |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 15 . 3/10 So peace comes... for a few millennia and then Shinigami will call again |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 14 . 3/10 Only one pain in the ass left to deal with |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 13 . 3/10 It’s going to only get more complicated when Danaerys finds out that Sansa is to marry Naruto as well |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 12 . 3/9 Part of me hopes Naruto isn’t the only lucky man to get more than one beloved |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 11 . 3/9 Jon Snow is dead, in his place is Aegon Targaryen |
ReaperOfBalance chapter 10 . 3/8 Margaery didn’t answer the question either |