RavenXDusk

Kit 1 - Roankit
Kit 2 - Goldenkit
Kit 3 - Tuftkit/Snowkit
Kit 4 - Clawkit.

I really enjoyed this story. Even though you didn't finish it I'm glad you put the summary at the end. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it. I really like it.

ummmmmm... why it's chapter 18 in place of chapter 26?

I prefer super long chapters. It's fun to read those, especially when the story is as enrapturing as this one is

I'm all for gay couples, if you're LGBT, etc, more power to you. But I honestly like Raven x Dusk

There's nothing wrong with homosexuality, although it IS a tad bit uncommon. I support gay rights mainly because my little brother is gay. I'm married to a wonderful young woman, we actually got married 3 months ago. And now she's pregnant with not just one baby, but three.
Not trying to boast, I just kinda start rambling sometimes lol :P

Ohhhhh. That's why her name is Foxpaw... She never took a mate..

Why is there an elder named Foxpaw? Was she blinded as an apprentice or something?...

Aaaaaand after a breath-taking half an hour of carefully pondering the prophecy, I think I know what it means. Not telling though~

Screaming. This was so good! I'm sorry you didn't enjoy writing it as much as we enjoyed reading it. We all love you! 3

Sorry, I forgot to put my name down. The review about making the sequel was mine. I'll put my name down.
-WarriorsErin

Thank you so much for this amazing story! I loved the ending, I don't know why, but it was absolutely amazing to read! Can I write a sequel to it? About Swiftfall's kits? I won't do it without your permission, since they are all your characters. Anyway, I hope you have a great time after this book, and maybe you'll write another story? Thank you!

So another tale has come to an end (uses narrator voice from fairytale lol) hey nice story sorry it did not work out too well it was a good one hope you keep writing even with severe writers block trust me I know how it feels... :3
~passionfruit (lol made that real dramatic)

While I am sad that you don't like writing this story anymore, I am thankful that you posted this to let us know how things would have gone down. You can always tell when the passion has left something, and it would have ended up being an unhappy experience for all of us. I hope to see you somewhere else on this site!