| Reviews for Siren: The Mermaid Miraculous Holder |
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Lysab9113 chapter 11 . 9/29/2019 Absolutely love it and nice coming up with a mermaid miraculous ️, please update soon |
Crazydog6645 chapter 11 . 9/28/2019 I’ll take over if you want me to once I get my computer fixed. And I had a great idea for an akuma The idea is that Chloé accidentally breaks an ice sculpture but the creator doesn’t believe it. And her father had enough and doesn’t believe Chloé. Hawkmoth tries to akumitized Chloe again but the akuma goes to the creator and she become frostbite. Chloe gets her legs trapped in a block of ice and falls off the building. Siren catches Chloe and stops her from hitting the ground floor pool at terminal veracity. Ladybug and cat Noir arrive but siren is defeated and stuck in a block of ice. Still shaken by her near death experience she causes enough ice to break and getting the siren out of her cold prison. After the akuma is defeated Chloe gets a nightmare where she’s frozen in a block of ice and completely shattering on the ground leaving no trace of her. Chloe doesn’t show up for several days and when marinette and the other go check up on her she a wreck. Chloe is too shaken to step out. |
Crazydog6645 chapter 4 . 9/27/2019 Actually there is a secret to why even chat noir and Ladybug can’t figure it out. The eyes actually do change colors slightly. But it is enough to make the illusion work. Marinette has light ocean sky blue eye. But as ladybug her eyes are ocean blue a slightly darker color. Alya has golden eyes but as Rena she has Amber eyes. In fact there is a little experiment you can do to see it work. Take 2 pictures of one person edit one of them to have a different eye color just a few shades darker or lighter. Print it. Wright the name on the back of who it is and then leave them with the picture side showing and distract you self for 3-6 hours then come back and you will be convinced that they aren’t the same person. That’s the same trick super man uses. And believe or not the hint has be in the show the whole time with the akumas! |
DragonRyd3r chapter 7 . 8/15/2019 Bro I think you kind of predicted both Syren and Frightningale |
Face Yourself chapter 4 . 12/12/2018 I get describing the outfit the first time... and maybe the second in case someone missed it. But now you're just wasting a paragraph being repetitive. Also, it's kind of insulting to have people figure out or even suspect each other's identities so easily, especially when there's supposed to be magic preventing people from connecting the dots even if it seems obvious. |
ChristiRose13 chapter 9 . 11/7/2018 COLBERT IS SUCH A SWEETIE PIE. and if I'm not mistaken...Isn't Kim smitten with Undene, A SWIMMER in his SWIMMING class in the show? I'm pretty surrrreeeeee |
ChristiRose13 chapter 5 . 11/7/2018 some other Catalyst.. ...I see what you did there [winky face] |
ChristiRose13 chapter 1 . 11/7/2018 *reads first paragraph* ARIEL!? |
DragonRyd3r chapter 11 . 6/6/2018 I'm pretty sure the creators saw this and were like "Hey, that's a great idea!' |
DragonRyd3r chapter 3 . 6/6/2018 I think you predicted Syren |
T-Dog-2022 chapter 11 . 4/14/2018 Hi, I started reading this story about 3-4 days ago and have already finished. I was really hoping that you could at least write a conclusion chapter! I am also planning on writing one of my OC miraculous holders into a story and thought yours was absolutely amazing! Keep up that great work! |
Disgaea Fan chapter 11 . 4/3/2018 Sorry to hear that your ending this story but I hope you get an inspiration to type another chapter. This is still a great story. |
decode9 chapter 11 . 4/2/2018 Aww...I really loved this story. Well it was still good. |
matthewszabo24 chapter 1 . 1/27/2018 can you do more Siren: The Mermaid Miraculous Holder |
matthewszabo24 chapter 10 . 1/27/2018 can do more mermaid story pleases |