I LOVE IT

HOW DARE YOU!...Make this freaking awesome fanfic,

(IT'S YOU!" Mitsuha shrieked in unbridled joy as she wraps her arms around Taki and pulls him into a tight embrace. "You're the one I've been looking for! I finally found you!")

this part made my cry because as soon as this part of your came up, the first chorus to "Nandemonaiya" played and the final chorus played at "THE END" its like I was watching a whole new movie but with a much more better ending, thank you for making this, your really made my day today, I was imagining what is actually happening in this story like i'm watching a movie in my head. I give this fanfic a 100/10 although it has some small mistakes it was still amazing, TY very much author.

Me too! I love that movie very much!

Taki x Mitsuha forever...
that really was amazing I loved it...

i love it, i love the the situations, the idea yo return to the mountain and those things, but some conversations were alittle bit forced, You could have written it more natural. But in sumary i love to readed it and fill that empty feeling that the end of the movie gave it to me, even if it is just a fanfic. Thank you
Psdd: i like the end of the movie too but if was not enough xdd

Very heartfelt and heartwarming, especially after watching the movie two times the past weekend in my local movie theater (I’d to wait almost a year to see it). With only that little observation I made you by PM, the rest of the story resonated in my mind because of how you handle, both Mitsuha and Taki’s personalities and memories about their encounter.

Indeed, a moment of happiness for them after 8 (for Mitsuha) and 5 (for Taki) years of looing for that personal.

Now I’ll read forevermore.

other than a major plot hole.. it was nice
how could mitsuha not know where her shrine god is if taki knew? mitsuha should be questioning taki how she knew something about her when they have not remembered anything yet.

Alright, I love this. I like how you have Taki a back story regarding his mother and his father. And I like how you actually put her name in kanji(?) that was really cool. I also like how she smacked him in that cute moment. Although I will say I wonder if you would have mentioned more of her friends about to get married and mention his name so hw would have thought back to them. But this is just a thought I had.
anyway this is great and I really like how you seem to capture their charters pertty well if I do say so myself.

After the movie, this is exactly the story I needed. Thank you.

Thank you for writing this!

Thank you! I just couldn't live after watching the movie like that it felt as if a piece of my heart had been broken and lost I felt incomplete. Leaving aside some grammatical tense errors your fanfic made it more complete and I even cried a bit. I wish that the original movie had your story at the end to make it more perfect and complete. Once again, THANK YOU!

this is nice x)

some grammar mistakes that i can pick, but nothing too bad. but aside from that, it was an excellent story, congrats

This was nice! We need more one shot stories like this!

Pretty good read overall. Here are my thoughts, though do not let them dissuade you, for they are meant to help you:

I do like how they remember each other, although it may have been better if they had kept it a secret from each other that they were "searching for someone dear". This would've added dramatic tension as we, the readers, know of it; however, they do not. This may invoke the feeling of "so close, yet so far".

There are some grammatical lapses in the sense of tenses and dialogue convention. This is just a personal nitpick as I still understood what you were trying to convey anyway, so it needn't be such a big deal.