Can't wait for more

This is amazing you are my favorite I love you ️️️

This looks cool and well-written! I'm glad it's manga/Brotherhood verse and not '03. I liked that bit about Flamel. ALSO! When Ed was talking about homunculi, he didn't mention Greed. And he said MOST of them were destroyed. Does that mean Greed is still alive?! (Oh, please-pease-please!)

Ah yes, the Night Vale Waterfrount, which does not extist. Not to be confused with the Dog Park, which you shouldn't be thinking about. Why are you thinking about the dog park? There is no Dog Park.

This is an amazing chapter and I can't wait to see what you have next planned for the Elric brothers. I really hope the woman in the shadows is not someone impersonating Tonks. Because Tonks and Al is a very adorable couple just saying. Anywho I can't wait for your next update lovely, keep up the good work! :D (hearts)

I am seriously loving this story! It's a shame that life always seems to get in the way. I am a bit unsure about how I feel about ed using a gun. He was so opposed to it and almost disgusted at the thought of a gun in the brotherhood series. Yes he's grown up and not as nïeve but still I don't see him using lethal force when he can avoid it. He's never really killed someone with his own hands and he's got more respect for life than that. Just my thoughts.

Dude! Tonks and Al can't be a couple! Remus and Tonks have a son named Edward Remus Lupin in the future, damn it! Besides, Mei Chang is better suited to Alphonse. She should be old enough to date now.

Hey... Sirius and Molly still have a relatively good relationship. They just disapprove of each others treatment toward Harry. Molly thinks Sirius should not treat Harry like an adult, while Sirius thinks she should not treat Harry, who he believes to be brave and matured far beyond his years(despite how he can be petulant). They don't out right hate one another, since they have a good friendship.

Congratulations on your graduation! And marriage! And kitten! Ger more kitten! So the villain will likely be an aspect Father never shows, maybe they were split when they were created? Well, not that i care about their origins.. keep writing! Your story is really great!

This is great! Nice grammar! And reaally nice plot! I love it! Question though:does ed still have his alchemy abilities? I know i'll probably find out in the next chap, but...

OMG KEEP WRITING! I LOVE IT!

A little rough but very enjoyable.

Congratulations on getting married, this is a great FanFiction so thanks for writhing this

Congrats on your milestones...and on the kitten. Cat's are awesome! Anyway, this was really great!

Congrats (for pretty much everything)!
I was waiting for this new chapter, and i'll be waiting for the others as well. Still love the story, still excited to see how it will turn.
Your story is definitively worth months of waiting, so don't worry too much about delays.
Keep going, please ! :D

(sorry for any English mistakes, I'm french, but i still love it)