i like

I hope it continues

g

What asinine garbage. This shit annoyed me in the book too. Ron doesn't deserve to be a prefect. It's not a matter of "just be happy for your friend" it's something that should be genuinely earned..

I really don't agree with the break up... its retarded and serves absolutely no purpose other than to make Harry look like a moron. God help you if you make them date other people during this time too..

I love this story and it is very original, but i was wondering if you were going to add anymore chapters to this story or not?

update please!

I'm kind of annoyed at Hermione... if she really wanted to go to the dance with him, she could have asked him herself, and she shouldn't have been mean to Harry even when she's jealous, what did she expect him to do? ignore his date

"CaLmLY"

It would be good to have the Sirius/Amelia story as a relationship in the background. Sirius needs someone and they make a good pair

I like a harmony relationship story without too much Dumbledore or Weasley bashing and how harry is not lord potter etc etc . Harry should have too many title at maximum he could have two and that is after sirius's death which i don't think the story is heading. Please continue the story

Excellent story so far, though I was sad Cedric died. Looking forward to reading more

just caught up on your story, one thing i've noticed is you trying to include susan in harry and hermione's relationship, please stop that as a friend she shouldn't be kissing him or holding his head on her lap friends don't do that and no need for a threesome when there are plenty of other guys/girls she could be build a relationship with,i do like the way neville stepped in and crushed rita by having the know-how about pure-blood culture, and then there is stuck up percy, what does penelope see in him, hopefully this percy can be changed, waiting for more

Liking this but a bit too close to Canon to stand out so far . Nice bit of background Sirius & Kreacher adds to over story though .

Well Hermione certainly isn't that keen on flying but she's not completely inept on a broom. At the end of first year she joined Harry and Ron flying brooms to catch the key in one of the traps guarding the Philosophers Stone.

I'm enjoying the story so far but there are some grammatical issues, mainly missing definite articles.

And exactly what did Neville 'explain' to Hermione about house elves?
I find it astonishing and rather disturbing that so many fanfiction authors go out of their way to justify the enslavement of house elves. Of course JKR didn't help by having Hermione unceremoniously drop her campaign in book 6, one of the many issues I have with HBP. Yes, Hermione went about things in a heavy handed and unsubtle way, but that doesn't mean she wasn't fundamentally right about the issue.

Apart from that, it's a good story