This one is good keep on going with this one

DO NOT LET FTDS(fairy tail dragon slayer) TOUCH THIS GEM THEY WILL RUIN IT BY CRAMMING IN SHIT THAT DOESNT BELONG IN THIS STORY! That said anyone else will do just fine, and yes I know my reaction is a little harsh but from viewing his earlier works to the trash heap he calls his stories now yeah don't trust that individual with this gem.

My writing skills suck but I can think of no less then ten ways to continue

I hope you rethink your decision and will be able to resume the story but if not it's a great story and I hope whomever adopts this great story does it justice.

What the hell I like this story... Sigh fine look up the authors hussbek, sakura demon alchemist, and fairy tail dragon slayer they are the most likely to adopt this story and your others.

so will you update to let us know if its been adopted

Noooooooo

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

good story, keenly following.

bonne histoire, vivement la suite.

I agree with kuranai being mother more then teacher comment in your authors note she did Thing same thing to yakumo kurama hinata's adopted sibling.

Great job please continue it

i think this fic needs a rewrite, there is too much 'they did this, that, and another thing' rather than actual dialog between the characters, i really dont want to read 'he then explained this' what i want is them actually having a conversation

Please make more please

So Naruto managed to save Karin and she on her way to meet the family gotta wonder if Ryoko's blood is from the Namikaze side or the Uzumaki anyways keep up the great work!

our naruto does not make sense, for Hinata, that she did not do anything for only persecuted he.

Pessudo love Hinata would get used to playing at the Academy. When he was alone, Hinata talked to him instead of looking at him, just staring at the trees like the last Stalker. What goals does Hinata have in life? To be strong on Naruto, be with Naruto, you give birth to two nice children with strange names. And what about the clan? what it is, in the end it is not Naruto-kun. If I hate such a simple character, it does not fit my mind. He does nothing for himself!