10/10 for me XD keep it up, it's a really good story. I've played both of the games all the way through and it makes this story even better! Can't wait to see more :)

Good on Nick for aiding Judy, even though she was still trying to catch him. It's not in his nature for him to ditch someone in need, even if said someone is a tenacious bunny whose determination knows no bounds! XD

Excellent job on this! They got off to rough start, but thanks to Nick's quick thinking, he's able to get away scot-free, and they became friends in the process, although that could change in a heartbeat if they cross paths again during another one of Nick's runs.

You're continuing this story along nicely, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here! :)

Interesting. I'm glad they left on good terms though I now have to wonder how they'll meet again, and what will happen to Judy when she shows up back at the precinct. This story just gets better and better and it is only chapter 2. :D

cool! my dad likes to play this game, and it's cool how you did a crossover with this. expecting an update soon! ;)

This is well written

So interesting

My god! That was amazing. Please continue it!

What an action-filled and pulse-pounding beginning! I've actually never played any of the Mirror's Edge games, but I'm really intrigued by what can be done with this crossover. You set up the world for this really well by explaining what the runners are used for in the city. Not only that, but I can totally see Nick and Judy be adept at parkour based on some of the things they did in the movie.

That definitely seemed like a lot of heat lying in wait for Nick; the ZPD really don't like how much the runners are embarrassing them, don't they? XD All of actions and movements before and during the case were described well and showed the fluidity of the motions involved. Also, what a heart-stopping finisher! Curse you Judy and your unflinching determination to get your suspect! XD

Overall, a solid and highly entertaining beginning! I'd be thrilled to see you continue this.

Wow, that's a lot of officers to try and capture a single runner. I wonder if it was a set up then...hmm. And that helicopter pilot is a jerk for trying to throw people off of it in midair. Hope he gets his license suspended. XD

And me thinks that both Judy and Nick are going to be having an interesting partnership in the future. Since they were able to survive Cliffside's waterfall, as well as the fall from the Rainforest District, I think they will survive this too.

I haven't yet played this game, but I've heard of it and like where you've gone with it. Very fast paced, very fun and quite the experience to read. Good work!