will this story be continue? i love the building relationship between hermione and casius

I really love this! I hope you continue!

I really, really like the start of this! I have never thought of a Caius/Hermione pairing before but it totally works! Looking forward to your next chapter with trepidation :)

P.s. If you are ever looking for a Beta for grammer etc, I'd be so happy to help you out. I'm on furlough which means I can't work right now and I'm going stir crazy not doing anything!

can't wait for an update

Continue por Favor.

Too much exposition in here to be honest, it wasn't particularly interesting to read this chapter. The first chapter was more engaging.

Also I would argue that you could work a bit on your dialogue, it feels very unrealistic, less of a conversation and more of a monologue. Additionally, I feel you tried to be formal in how the vampires speak, which I agree with and it makes sense considering their age but it's not consistent so a few of the dialogue lines felt weirdly informal and American (for lack of a better word).

Finally there's some grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, for example confusing "then" with "than".

However I see that you are not a native English speaker and it's completely understandable that the dialogue doesn't flow as well. The descriptions are fine I would just recommend a beta if you can find any.

Besides that it's an interesting plot.
Cheers
Luumus

please update soon! I love this story!

I am loving this story I have been looking for a very good story with the match of these two individuals I love how you you're going in-depth with them yet trying to bring out Hermione's inner self that she never shows people I really hope you update this story it is very good I normally don't leave reviews I love the way you're doing this story and I do hope you continue it

Are you still writing this?

oooh i can't wait for the next chapter. this is really good so far!

Waiting for the next chapter, thanks for your work

this is really good! I can't wait to see where it goes next!

Loving it please continue soon

great update! I can't wait to read more, thank you for sharing!

Ooohhh, I hope you write more again soon... I really want to know if she follows harry advice..