i have an idea..

as the team fairy b looks for laxus and the thunder tribe.. mira is having sickness and is throwing up.. ''

Another epic story, and one that hasn't been sadly discontinued like others! I'm looking forward to seeing more from your stories of the goat, Itachi.

Loving this story can't wait to read more, though I hope that Madara can bond with Ultear and get a redemption arc.

Es increible está historia q de pillado con el prologo y no pare de segiir este fic

*sniff* that was *blows nose* BEAUTIFUL *sobs* MADARA FINDING LOVE *sobs harder* THIS IS SO AMAZING

Binge-read the first 43 chapters, you got a great story going on! Do you have any plans to explore Madara further revealing to Itachi the fate of Sasuke (from what he knows ofc, like their fight and his rinnegan)?

yeah ... so you got a shinobi training a bunch of mages and you are telling me their strength did not significantly change since the story is still the exact same as canon ... why do you write this fanfic if there is no difference to the original story ? what a colossul waste of time

I hope you wont kill Irene in the next war.

Never thought I’d feel sympathy for madara.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

This is what you call a high quality fanfiction

So is Itachi and the other Akatsuki members also mortally attached to Zeref like Madara was?

Wow gotta love plot convenience

Nice chapter!

It's a great chapter BUT I have 1 complaint to make why do you have to skip the one-side battle between Madara and Hades and his interaction with Acnologia? Seriously man everyone would love to read that.

What an amazing chapter, seeing Madara and Ur's development was fantastic, and in my view you are right, Madara just did not form a family in Naruto because the horror of the war and the loss of his brothers changed him definitely to the point of having no eyes for anything but a dream world, he and Obito agreed that it is impossible to have peace in the world, if he thought that way, it also explains why he should not have been sexually involved with a woman.

Having a new opportunity to start over after failing with his goal, Madara could fall in love and wish for a peaceful life and live as he always wanted, so I think the way you developed the character is completely justified, just one thing I was confused about, Madara with the Rinnegan couldn't just take Zeref's soul and simply seal his soul somewhere so he doesn't have a body again? I believe Madara can use all the skills of the Rinnegan, and one of them allows to rip the soul out of whoever it is, but anyway, I don't know if it would work, so the question remains.

I was sad about what happened to Madara, seeing that he could have been happy with Ur and Ultear really made me sad, but it left a good resolution for the character who again became the old Madara, I hope Ultear can soften the heart of Madara again despite being an almost impossible task after everything that happened to him.

One more curiosity on my part, couldn't Madara be able to revive Ur with the Rinnegan without losing his life? I believe that Uzumakis like Nagato for example, only died because he was already weak and without chakra, despite being a technique that the user gives his life in exchange for reviving other people, I believe that Uzumakis could survive this technique if they have a good amount of chakra, this is due to the huge vital energy they have, and this would also apply to the Senju clan. As Madara has Mokuton, I believe he has a great vital energy comparable to Senju, and because of that, in my view he could revive Ur if he wanted to without dying in the process, but it is only my opinion of course.

Sorry for writing so many words, you did a great job :), I'll be waiting for the next chapter.