Reviews for Dragon Ball Negative
Lord Richard chapter 13 . 7/17/2017
Wow, this is getting good! Haha I like how Cooler and the rest of the little villians try to control Black, who doesn't even acknowledge their existences! Black is the true evil god. I would love to see Goku Black vs Demigra..

Also now that Black has run into Kuroaku, which one of these super saiyan roses' will win this climatic battle?
I also wonder if Kuroaku will run into Gohan, Vegeta, and Trunks so they can help him.. hahah.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
Fuck you, fucky fucky fucky fuck you
Lord Richard chapter 12 . 7/4/2017
This chapter definately makes up for ssj4 beating a ssjgssj. Vegeta going SSJR and totally scaring Platinum Cooler to death, wow! Im really liking SSJR more and more.. I feel like SSJR should be in it's own class, as well as it only being attainable with god ki. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Lord Richard chapter 10 . 7/3/2017
That's an interesting twist, with Goten turning ssj4 and evil as well.. Although Goten shouldn't be able to do none of that to Vegeta.. Gohan, maybe, but definately not Vegeta. Last time I checked, Super Saiyan GOD Super Saiyan is superior to super saiyan 4 dude.. I don't know where you're going with this..
Blake2020 chapter 3 . 6/6/2017
sweet
Blake2020 chapter 2 . 6/6/2017
exciting
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 6/6/2017
good
Aym Blast Blue chapter 9 . 5/8/2017
I like your progress to this story. According to the setting of the chapter, you should keep the name of the setting without the three periods. The first paragraph should say only 'Capsule Corp' in bold words. The next setting, you don't had to put in bold words. Instead, it goes as non-bold words "Meanwhile, in the the forest near the Hidden Sand Village (dub)" without the three periods as well. Good job, always update ever two to five weeks!
dolguldur chapter 5 . 4/11/2017
great chapter
update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 3/1/2017
Plz update because I love this story and you areally doing a great job but please update
dragon chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
make goku ssgodssj2 please
dragon chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
common update this
dolguldur chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
great chapter
update soon
kakarotsanmistic chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
Interesting story and I really like it so you have my support so keep it up and I wanted dbz style action like punching shockwaves the shake the entire landmass and planetary shockwaves that shake the foundation of core and heavy lifting scenes like mountains buildings islands trucks buses asteroids etc. And Lot's of destruction in dbz style than your story will become more awesome and worth reading it so please add this kind of stuff and don't make goku underpower or weak because you already know how strong and op dbz/s characters are .. multiversal level so better remain this and also tell us how much powers he is using during the fight like 1% or 2% or something because you already know how over power he is multiverse level and specially dbz/s saiyan's awesome powers so please don't make them nerf and make your chapter long like 100 or 200k words and I wanted action pack story so please don't disappointed me.. even if you want to balance the story with making underpowering goku than I understand but still please make him little op at last... and. but if you making him little nerf so I don't mind because it's your story but we fans and readers wants action pack story and Lot's of awesome fighting scenes in dbz style so don't disappointed us. ...BTW fantastic work and thanks for the chapter..but if you want to make your story more interesting than read " The Golden Fairy" and I'm 100% sure it will really inspire you...and please pair between goku x tsunade