Wonderfull piece of fanfiction.

Eh too badly written, it became a chore reading this. The sentences that were stolen from badly translated canon material, the word padding via writing every technique bloodline etc name in both Japanese and English, the overly edgy yet not too logical behavior pattern seen in Keimei, the numerous times you referenced canon like "in the wotld of prankster Uzumaki boy",
the overused fanon cliches like MC being attacked numerous times with deadly intent...
It is a classical bashing fic with the only difference being MC's name and genitals.

But the lack of "Mah precious people" was probably the one thing that was better than average.

I love the story so far. I'm looking forward to what happens with the tiger summons and what Jiraiyas reaction will be.

I love this fanfic I hope you update soon 3

I'm shipping Keimei with Sasuke xD sorry not sorry

Here's hopeing for more.

plz update soon

Please update soon!

I dont think you know what a title is.. in this context its a job profession. If we are going by the logical route, whether you respect or not you cant go around calling your superiors by name.
Also aside from the hatake stuff even calling 'yuuhi/san' is kinda disrespectful since you are showing no value towards their title. Lets not even talk about showing an attitude towards the village leader so to speak... (this is going by your logic)
I guess i know what kinda character you want to write but its kinda badly executed and makes your character seem more pompous than anything. You could look at old destiny-crap neji and how he acts with his supiorors for a more logical character with some attitude...

The papers shuffled back into a neat stack on his desk Warbender looks up, slides the stack of papers to the side to his left, and then into the authors eyes that were glinting with slight amusement, and admiration. "Your premise for this story is well thought out, enjoyable in it's presentation. I have to wonder when another chapter will make an appearance. As this is engaging, flows well, has a definite balance between for-ground action/dialog, and background description/goings on. While this also engages on a more intellectual level. Has it's ways to engage your emotions as well. Well done so far. I look forward to your next chapter. Until then I have other reading to do. Good day to you." Warbender then turns towards a stack of papers sitting to his right. Slides the stack in front of himself, and proceeds to pick up the first page.

There is no reason to consider that it is in any way some kind of "opposite" to the basic bunshin. There is certainly no reason to relate any of the other techniques to them.

It is never explained in series why Naruto could not get a handle on bunshin. While his poor chakra control would have done him no favors, he was still able to readily use kawarimi and henge, learn the shadow clone in a day, and even learn difficult chakra control exercises like tree walking and later water walking. A simple "poor chakra control" explanation doesn't work. The best we can say is that it highlights the idea that learning jutsu is more than just "pass control check, learn skill".

Note however that there is no known connection between control and amount of chakra. No-one in canon when discussing Naruto's chakra control ever suggested that there was a connection between power and poor control. This is simply fanon popularly used to excuse Naruto's poor control at the start of the series.

If we look at Naruto, he improves his chakra control quite rapidly once he starts actually training it.

A simpler explanation is that his control was poor at the start of canon because he a) had no idea what he was doing (since he kept skipping class), and b) was hyperactive and undisciplined. But mostly, he'd just never learned what to do properly.

Really don't see the "we need a reason why Naruto's an idiot at the start" thing. I just don't. He's twelve years old and has had no parental guidance his entire life, why would he be studious? Because he talks about being Hokage someday? When I was 12 years old I thought I could be the president, that didn't mean I was studying like mad to get into a good college or whatever, it meant I was a dumb kid with wildly inflated notions of what I was capable of.

We really don't need to come up with some excuse for why he's extremely ignorant of stuff that's basic knowledge to his peers. He's a delinquent who skips class all the time to goof off and play pranks, and even when he's in class he often doesn't pay attention. That's all canon, and I don't get why people can't just take it at face value. Iruka was the only person in Naruto's life who cared enough about his future to push him and was actually in a position to do so right up until Naruto graduated from the academy, and he had a lot of other students he had to teach.

Remember that Naruto's problem was that he would mold too much chakra, and then because he had terrible control, would waste most of it thus underpowering his jutsu. Naruto's sick clones were a result of underpowering the technique (which makes sense as an effect).

Wow can't wait to see her in action with her tiger summons. She's already as ferocious and graceful as a tiger~

As noted much earlier in the story by Kakashi, the Kyuubi inside Naruto is probably the reason why his chakra control is so bad. Thing is, Naruto at the point of learning has just managed to befriend Kurama and fused their chakra together as to access its full power. It is not only possibly, but likely that this caused Naruto’s chakra control issues to disappear entirely, and since this, its the first time he is forming a Rasengan with one hand without the Kyuubi screwing up his control.

Yes. Pre Shinobi War, he had to use two hands because of his poor chakra control. During and after the war, he didn’t use normal rasengan that much. He used a bunch of different types of Rasengan which all needed shadow clones.

During Boruto, I am not sure if he could use normal Rasengan with one hand, but i’m guessing so because he could use one handed seals which required delicate chakra control.

also, goddamn, just reading about the fangirls‘ screeching became more annoying than anything ever after a while lol

are you still alive?
July ain’t all that hot... :/