That's a really interesting format of writing! You didn't make it confusing at all, and you got their characters so good, I can almost hear their voices! Funny how "kuwago" means "owl" in Filipino.
Will be adding to favorites because this is hella good!

What's with the "Down with the Critics United" thing in the past reviews? Feels like and inside joke, which it probably is.

I loved it! It wasn't confusing at all and I loved piecing the puzzle together as I was reading! Great idea and execution.

Fred's letter at the end is going to get sent to Molly

I'm one of the only people to have not read HP and only dozed through some of the film's. Yet I loved this story. Even with my limited knowledge I çould see all the characters and hear their voices. Ron and his potion homework running through made me laugh as much as the love potion mix up thing.

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

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Dearest Cissy,

I want to have a career before I get married. O_O

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
You'd better keep a good eye on your son. Years of professing to hate those blood traitors and yesterday he goes and announces his intention to marry one of them. He's actually written the little whore a love letter, did you know that? I only found out because the little wretch's brother tried to send your son a Howler, and it got sent to me instead!

My father doesn't want to make life difficult for himself. O_O

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
So Harry barged in with his wand out, shouting at us that we were in danger and that we had to leave NOW, and before I could properly register what he was saying, BELLATRIX LESTRANGE and DRACO MALFOY came in after him!

The company has growing pains now. T_T

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
Dear Hermione,

I got my hair dyed black. ;)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
Dear Hermione,

Tom smiled at Mary sheepishly. :P

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

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Cissy,

Strange O.o

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Once again, you demonstrate that you are one of the cleverest witches at our school. Well done!

Nice!

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Harry.

this is gold...

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Or try to drag her, because Bellatrix gave this incredibly loud scream of rage and before I could throw up a proper Shield Charm, she'd cast bloody purple FIRE in my direction! I tried to dodge but part of her curse still hit me in the arm – which is not great, but better than it could have been, because I'm pretty sure it was the Scorch Curse, the one that's supposed to encase its victim in fire. Great mental image there, isn't it?

What is that?

Absolutely Brilliant!

hahahaha awesome