I loved this. It was perfectly done. Even with the attempt of making it pg, which was done well.

Sad to see you go, but maybe you could put up a notice here should you finish the story on AO3. I don't care if it takes years, but I haven't gotten around to start using AO3 regularly yet and it would be nice to read the end of this. If it's annoying to do though, don't. If this page doesn't work for you, don't use it. You are a great author and it would be a shame if your joy in writing would be reduced by something that simple.

It's cool man. If it is too stressful on this site than do what you have to do.

I wish you good luck!

Ahh yes, another great chapter. Keep it up I love it!

yessssss

not having time to write as much as before does not change the quality of your work. It's awesome. That's all I can sa right now.

THE END?! Noooooo I don't want this story to end anytime soon :( will you be writing a sequel?

I hope you break that Writer's Block down with a sledge hammer

Don't worry, your story is worth the wait and I am sure you will be doing just fine once the ending comes to you.

I definetly liked it! And I was really happy to see a new chapter. I missed Rhia and your Crowley is the best I've ever seen him in fanfiction. And I just adore Jake and Rhias friendship. It's good to see they don't let Max mess with it too much. I'm waiting to see who deals with him first. Jake, cause he deserves more? Or Rhia? Or Crowley? They all would have their reasons...

yay

Yesssss thank you so much! Loved the chapter.
Keep it up 3

Lol this chapter was great!

Great chapter! Loved it!

This is great!

Very tiring day so sorry for a short review