Please update

Very, very unique and interesting concept. Are you gonna write more?

Very interesting...she's going to kil him

Plz update

amazing, can't wait for more

I haven't read the updates for a while, and I'm both glad and not at all, because I can't wait for more

This is pretty darn amazing. I love it. It's well-written and on-point. And the cjaracterization is excellent. Thank you for sharing!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

ohhhhhhh I want you to continue so bad

Very good story so far. For the first time, Hariel took control and even if it frighten her a bit (hence the boggart), it please her too because her whole life was marked by a lack of control. I think her her knee jerk reaction to Snape's by proving him wrong about her potion's capacities and the fact that he's her favorite teacher also shaped her as a different person. Unlike Harry, she don't see him as an unfair teacher but like someone who push her to do her best. She use more her brain and so she's less manipulable.

I also liked the fact that Hariel had brown eyes that shone green with magic power (in opposite to Tom, amusingly it's the main colors of the other's House). I wonder how her relationship with Tom will develop and if she's going to find the others horcruxes and feel a link.

Hope you update this.

Please UPDATE! :)

Please update your story soon!

Oh dear

I am absolutely loving this! It's written very well and I love all the interactions between Tom and Hariel.