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forcestarx chapter 2 . 1/4/2018 Squall or Cloud is more than strong enough to defeat Darth Vader on their own. You need to stop dickriding star wars |
Disneylover93 chapter 3 . 6/12/2017 This is going to be fun, but as I said in the first chapter you should work on putting the periods in the sentence. |
Disneylover93 chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 Oh wow. It looks like Leon's going after the storm troopers. You're missing periods and you should put the comma on the word "Fine". Other than that this was a really cool opening for a crossover. |