Nice. And I usually don't read stories with a whole little sex in them. I'm surprised I'm enjoying this one so much.

Wow I love it! This is beautiful and dark... I really love it!
I'm sorry for my English because I'm French and not so good in other languages but I hope you understand...
I want to read the following!

Big kisses from France, Elisha.

I'm loving this!

Lame Link should of Slaughtered the Gerudo.

Stop Nerfing Link for Plot induced Stupidity.

He can take on Armies.. But have trouble in this story?

Ganondorf was sealed in the twight realm

Innacurate.

Are you aware of the three Timelines.

Must you poorly potray gerudo.

Theu are already on thin ice and Implied to that the Hylians ran them off the desert

I admit I've only skimmed the story, so I would be able to see if it's a good read. It certainly is, yes. Smooth writing style and everything, BUT. Yes, there's a but - there is a detail that seriously put me off: Zelda not wanting to have sex with Link where "all these sick women are touching each other". Of course, who would be wanting to have the only kind of healthy, sane sex - the straight one - in a room where all of this revolting, disgusting lesbian sex has taken place? *sarcasm*. I see why she would hate the Gerudo, but THIS should not be a reason. I just can't imagine someone as wise as Zelda to be homophobic, and... I hope that's not the author using her as their voice.

Ok that was that, good luck with your writing c: