| Reviews for Once Upon Another Time |
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gabzep chapter 1 . 5/11 Love it! |
VtrCst chapter 1 . 5/7 Outstanding work! |
Carthienes chapter 1 . 4/29 It's a shame we don't get to see this one play out, but thank you. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26 Beautifully plotted and written. I love the whole idea. |
kimjo2 chapter 1 . 1/20 Great stuff! Thanks so much |
Latarra chapter 1 . 12/11/2019 Wonderful story. |
kyoshi711 chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 Wow what a let down. |
Lrsgreenleaf chapter 1 . 10/20/2019 This is such a great idea. As a stand alone story it makes sense. After all it is from the view of a Harry that ceases to exist...by choice. |
H Harmon chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 My review is almost identical to the one I just did for “The Time Traveller.” This is a beautiful first chapter. I would like to read a second that sums up the changes that were made. Thank You. |
peggy77 chapter 1 . 9/5/2019 I can completely understand why you didn't continue this because I have read A Marauder's Plan a few times and love that story. But this is also a great start to a time travel story, too. You are a very good writer. |
Renny236 chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 This was indeed an intriguing start. Off to read A Marauder’s Plan. |
christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 8/16/2019 Another one-shot I wish had just a little more but I understand how it could be a bit repetitive after A Marauder’s Plan. |
Zile0 chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 Loved this! Going to read A Marauder’s Plan next. |
madie080802 chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 Bravo! Great storytelling. M |
tec4cleveland chapter 1 . 7/21/2019 There's no greater gift a writer can give than to leave his/her readers craving more. You need to continue this ... if only to show us AFWBD's reaction to the Harry who no longer dances to his tune. Really interesting premise and excution. |