Cool

please write some more. it's good.

The killer was a great twist. With how short the first part is. It still feels like almost half a book. You left it off in a good place. I really like it.

ooooh interesting, this is different to what I normally read but I found it quite interesting, I'm looking forward to part two XD

You have my interest. Probably the most audacious use for Trina yet in a story. Wonder what set the older sister off on this rampage.

Interesting...please continue!

I like Trina doing it for Jade too. Looking forward to the next part.

Trina certainty went off the deep end, crossing a line that should never crossed, wow.

She certainly reminded me of Johnny the homicidal maniac, all thatcwas missing was painting a wall with blood and the insane monologs.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Dark. Now I'm left wondering what drove Trina to those extremes? Something we'll see in chapter two, I guess. I'll be waiting.