Reviews for LOUDERTALE
Foxycraft9 chapter 1 . 5/5
OK i AM an great fan of loud house AnD undertale you is great writing an tale that normally is the journey of an alone kid:frisk bit you are making an tale with such journey and i liked i would loved to see the louds finding undyne alphys mettaton and the others monsters i laughted só much on the reaction of lisa on the fried show só i ask you to make this tale longer
deeznutthebest chapter 12 . 5/3
Nothing is too long for me
cabgrant chapter 1 . 4/4
Stop with the Lincoln and Ronnie Anne being boyfriend and girlfriend which they never were in the first place. They're eleven years old.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/13
For the people who thinks Superdimentio77 is dead, he is not dead. He is still active on Devaintart, so he is still alive. He just haven't been updating Loudertale. Why he not updating Loudertale? I don't know. He has his reasons, and his life doesn't revolves on finishing a fanfiction. As much as I want him to update, we have to respect his decisions.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/10
I don't believe there's any ought way to put this but..

I seriously believe that you may be dead.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/10
i'm Confused the Exclamation marks and the question marks has spaces now i don't remember them having spaces is the writer returning or is it just me?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2019
It's been over one year, so this fanfiction is official dead. You're still active in devaintart, so at least you're still alive and well. I hope you could at least leave an author note that you no longer want write this fanfiction anymore.
Gusty chapter 16 . 12/20/2019
It's been nearly a year. Where are you? Please continue where you left off.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/19/2019
guest don't be so mean to him. The computer virus is problem (although if he is on deviantart active it seems to be gone hopefully) and a house fire can be a burden to someone (like he says seeing your home in flames). And considering his chapters are pretty long (and very good) only one takes a lot of time to write and he also as more things in life than this story (and sometimes you just have a bit of a problem with overcoming laziness).
I also want that the story continues but give the author time to make sure that the story becomes good.
guest chapter 16 . 12/17/2019
You haven't updated in a year! Where are you?! Why are you not updating? We know that you had a house fire and a computer virus last year but why have you not got back to writing and finishing this story while you're still active on deviantart? If you were still writing, you would have reached Asgore by now.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/2/2019
It's been nearly a year since your last update. If you were a writer, you would have been fired for lack of progress.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/14/2019
Hope you continue soon. I really want to see some moments from Untertale with them.
My Top 5 Moments I want to see:
1. The Old Lab (the Loud siblings exploring the creepy old lab and finding the old recordings from Asgore and Toriel)
2. Hearing the story of the monsters (in the final act where all the different monsters tell you the story of Asriel and the Human child)
3. The Louds finding out about Sans full power (the confrontation at Judgement Hall, maybe also demonstrating some of it)
4. Encounters with Mettaton (all his wacky shows would be funny with the Louds, also their reaction to Mettaton Ex; could you also making them find out he is Napstablooks cousin)
5. Undyne (the first time seeing her, the chases and the fight; I think it is also clear that Undyne and Lynn would be good friends)

PS. : If you get to the fight with Asgore (I know at the pacifist route is no battle), could you enter a battle at first, the Louds refuse to fight and Toriel then breaking it up (the rest as normal).
CharacterOne chapter 8 . 10/22/2019
damned onion ninjas they are pestering me again
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2019
Its October and still nothing. Happy Halloween.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/4/2019
Its September and still nothing.
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