| Reviews for Swordbending |
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Alliyah Baluyot chapter 1 . 1/29 This was so good. I was not expecting to enjoy this that much seeing as I hate and despise Zucest a lot and it’s wrong in so many ways, but damn this was a definite exception ngl |
Jessica9906 chapter 1 . 2/9/2019 great i love it When will we continue? Sokka should put her pregnant |
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 2/2/2019 I have been looking for a poly Zuko eith a Sokka and Azula that wasn’t toxic in the fact of rape/her being crazy after canon. So this was a neat find. |
QueerTransGirl29 chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 This is really good. |
badkidoh chapter 1 . 3/20/2018 Great story. |
jamielynn25 chapter 1 . 8/15/2017 Oh my. I loved it. I wasn't excepting that. |
Despy chapter 1 . 8/4/2017 You had me at swordbending. I love it lol Definitely the best story of this nature that I have read in a long time. |
Yaoi-Nation chapter 1 . 5/20/2017 THAT. Was glorious. I mean,, WOW! I laughed the whole time because honestly,, I'm goofy and just imagining this scene happening in the real ATLAB woulda just made my whole entire 2017. I love your writing style and out of boredom,, I'm deciding to read your other books! Good job and once again. GLORIOUS. |
Icewhisker21 chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 Yay! I finally found time to read this. Sorry it took so long...but it was worth the wait. Hot and sexy as usual! For your first time writing a threesome I personally believe you did very well :) The reciprocation between them was equal and it didn't feel like I was jumping from one smutty action to the next. It flowed well. And the endings I love because cuddles plus Azula and Zuko tenderness. Thanks so much for writing this! I enjoyed every second of it ;) |
reader chapter 1 . 2/22/2017 Holy shit it was hot. |
clarielparke chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Fans of ATLA, slash and Azula, look no further! Here are these three, all rolled into one neat package. With the dom/sub roles clearly defined (no switching here) and implied backstories including sibling incest and yaoi lovers, this triangle heats up from the start only to keep accelerating. Good work. |
Fanwright chapter 1 . 2/15/2017 Nice job here PPB! Okay, a lot is going on here. Sokka and Zuko are basically friends with benefits and Azula walks in on them. The ending here sums up why this story is called "sword-bending". Aroused, she vows to keep their secret if they can both satisfy her - at the same time. You really used your imagination here and it shows. The sex scenes are wonderfully explicit and satisfyingly dirty. You don't shy away from the choice of words and it creates a truly sexy environment. You also show off your great love for each pairing listed above. All three get their fill of each other, though Azula seems to have benefited the most from it, given that Sokka and Zuko really need to keep their secret on the down low. Of note - there is an undertone to their personalities in bed and you've already made it clear through the writing. Zuko's calling the shots throughout the story and delivers the final gasp of pleasure for Azula, very aggressive and at time greedy. Azula for her part is the most submissive here as she receives pleasure from each man and derives pleasure from them when they both shift their attention to each other, which happens a fair bit. It should be noted, too, that she does this willingly. Sokka's in between I'd say, but he's also submissive as well, pretty much going along with what Zuko says willingly and even just spectating as Azula and Zuko go at it in the end. He's more "sweet" and "cute" - in the end its meant to balance out between Zuko's more aggressive, greedy nature here and its interesting that Azula is quite taken in by him so quickly - he seems to be the first man she's been with other than Zuko. This feeling that she has for Sokka - something akin to a budding attraction or mild interest, is countered by her familiarity with Zuko. They have history here, it shows through the writing, and it each take advantage of that shared history. All in all, its a satisfying read and it has more than enough content here to please either the Zukka, Sokkla, and Zucest camp! It fun, its sexy, and it delivers! |
fulcrum101 chapter 1 . 2/14/2017 very good. Keep it up. |