Reviews for Child of Electricity |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 NEW CHAPER PLEASE, IT'S BEEN YEARS |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 i want more of thos this story is amazing. Taba koko rasing moon is a great story and im exsided about chapter 3, in chapter 3 you should all the other tapu shocked to find moon,also in next chapter tapu koko should start teaching moon about pokemon she needs to meet hua. I really love this story dont forget about it and im sure everyone thinks the same. Ill check this story in a month |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2019 this story was posted 2 two years ago please hurry |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2019 Ill give your storyline a 10/10 i love the plot and i will give you my saport in the story |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7/2019 this chapter was amazing to I love how tapu koko is acting like moon's dad |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 this was amazing i want more of this |
warfighterzack chapter 2 . 1/5/2019 this is such a cute and sweet story OMG I LOVE IT PLEASE MAKE MORE |
Gracidea of the Valley chapter 3 . 8/26/2017 I love this story so far. The interactions between Tapu Koko and Moon are too cute. D ~3 Maybe for future chapters, interactions between Moon and Hau as they grow older (like playdates when their guardians have to do work), and Moon becoming friends with the Pokemon around the island, and if they aren't friendly to her, 'Dad' isn't going to be happy... I understand the struggle of universities and coursework too well, so I hope you manage to keep your head above water. *thumbs up* |
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 3 . 8/18/2017 Take your time, but you have a great story. |
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 7/1/2017 poor little moon. |
storyreader21 chapter 3 . 4/12/2017 Great story. Looking forward for the next chapter and end of Hiatus. Also for your other story you mentioned I suggest a female protagonist. Also I suggest that one of this stories protagonist (Moon) recieve an Alolan Vulpix as a pokemon when she starts her journey. |
Miki-chan13 chapter 3 . 4/4/2017 Good luck with the university and school- I just found your story and finished reading it. It's a really heartwarming and really cool take on the sun and moon games you've written and I eagerly and patiently await for your next chapter :) Also, give Guzma a daughter :D |
Platinum9732 chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 Sorry to hear that dude! Programming games can be hell and writer's block sucks. I understand, keep up the great work. |
ChloboShoka chapter 3 . 4/2/2017 Good luck with uni. I thought the first few chapters were great. |
Dragonsrule18 chapter 3 . 4/2/2017 Hey, I understand. Real life can get hectic and when writer's block hits, it hits hard. I do have an idea, but I might need to research about it first. |