I llve Olaf so much!

I absolutely loved this story, it was so well paced! I’m definitely going to read the rest of your frozen stories.
Ps I’d love to see a sequel to this in the future, any plans?

A fellow devoted Christian here! But reading Elsanna fanfics lol. I really enjoyed reading your story. I saw the hard work and effort to make every single chapter as I read it. I'm glad that you also put NSFW warnings before the chapter starts (When I saw it was High NSFW, I pay attention more to the chapter.)

You know what you would be dealing with writing a religious-Wincest story, but you made it till the very end! I applaud you're effort and amazing writing. Keep up the good work!

The prohibition in Leviticus, I believe it is, has had much scholarly investigation (by true academic scholars, not bible thumpers with an agenda, and there id reason to believe that the wording was changed in a much later translation. The original text, it seems, appears to prohibit lying with very close relations, such as parents, first cousins, etc. It appears that with the later influence of laws by other nations in the area, it was changed to incorporate this new outside influence. There are zero original documents in the supposed holy books of christianity or judaism, there is ample evidence that books of the "bible" were mostly never written by those the church said did, and most have no mentioned author at all. There were many different sects of christianity of the early church up until around the time of the council of nicea (sp?). This just further goes to show that christianity, like all religions, are a religion which was created by humans. There is no compelling evidence we find to say otherwise. This an interesting story which you are tackling, a very brave thing to do, whatever your position ultimately is. You are doing a great job with this story.

If the Bible were so straightforward on its message, things would be easier to understand.

What bible is this guy using?

I have to say, I'm only in chapter 3 and this is already hard to read.

It's not the writing or the story. No, quite engaged with those parts. It's just the way the bible camp people talk.

I'm a Catholic. My whole family is. Even back when I was a kid and I had to go to mass daily with my dad, I think I'd have clawed out my ears if I had to listen to people sound so darn artificial.

Again this is nothing against your writing, people do talk like this. I just can't stand them.

Saying "Praise Him," instead of "Great" in casual conversation is just...

Just talk like people.

Wonderful story! Just read this in a matter of a few days and I have to say. Great job! The ending was sweet and amazing, the "scenes" were wonderfully executed, the lightheartedness and true love in this story was just fantastic. Also there's the fact about Anna and Elsa's mother being so hateful and prejudice against the gays, it's a shame that there are people out there who truly do hate gay people, personally I don't hate them, I just don't want to get hit on by a man because I am simply not a homosexual. However, I have no problems with being friends with gay people. This story had a lot of good points pertaining to real life and that's exactly why you are getting a perfect 10 from me. There's a lot that I can say about this story but you have my stamp of approval.

10/10

Have a great day and happy writing!

This chapter made me deeply uncomfortable. Then again there were lots of moments in this story that did so. I knew the instant you started getting super meta on religion you'd eventually tackle the "hypocritical Christian" thing, but damn I did not expect the whole group to end up at a frat party.

It's still a good story, but this chapter made me feel gross.

love the reference to the old Disney cartoon the weekenders, not many people I know still remember that great show, it's a shame they ended it

Excellent story! Casting Elsa and Anna as sisters and camp counselor's in a modern setting works well. I think the angst and anguish over their attraction to each other may be a little underplayed, but on the whole, the story is well written and quite enjoyable. The sex parts of the story are pretty well done, and clearly marked in the header for those that want to skip over it. Kudos for mentioning kinks that might not appeal to all, as well.

I like how well you weaved mutual attraction with genuine affection in this chapter. it was truly beautiful

I just love this fic! It’s such a well written, interesting and original story.
I read plenty of elsanna's fics but this one story still on my top 3, That’s is how much I love it. I love the girls relationship in this fic, they really love each other.
I would love to see a sequel of this story or at least one chapter showing the girls in the future, cause for me something still seems incomplete in this story, perhaps it was the lack of information about their mother's reaction, Idk.
Sometimes I imagine this story becoming a indie movie or something, LOL, that would be awesome and I definitely would watch.
Well, I just wanted to say thank you for writing this. It’s really really good. 3

This story is literally my childhood. I think I’m having flashbacks to my summer camp days of “shorts have to be longer than your fingertips” and “no wearing bathing suits around the boys” and “no hanging out with the boys unless in groups of at least 2 females and 2 males” as if it was my fault what their actions were. Jokes on them, I was crushing hard on my female camp counselor hahaha.

I’m really enjoying the story so far, but damn I didn’t think this story would bring back so many negative memories. I grew up indoctrinated just like the characters in this story, too innocent for my own good, with my “Jesus stick” shoved up my ass as if I was better than the “heathens”. It was all just rules and regulations to keep me “safe from sin and lustful eyes”. I will continue to read, despite the bad memories, because I can’t wait for the moment Elsa says “fuck this shit” like I myself eventually did!

Also, I’m sure this is unnecessary, but when I say this story is like my childhood I am ONLY talking about the religion part. Not the other questionable themes. Hahaha I just want to make sure that’s clear.

If you can see what's happening in the world today, since it's all over and the problems are only getting worse, just know that these are the end times; the days Jesus warned about. He gave us signs to look for which can be found in Matthew 24 in the bible and told us to watch. To not let these times come upon you unaware.

Understand that the rapture is at hand and can happen any moment. The day of the Lord is coming like a thief in the night and you do not want to be left behind.

When I reach out to people I encourage them to come out of this world and to seek the father in heaven while he may be found since 1 John 2:17 tells us in the Word of God aka the bible:

"The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever."

A lot of popular anime, games, movies, books, music and etc is of the devil. You don't want to be indulging in something that has no place in the kingdom of God since that will put your soul at risk. 1 John 2:15-17 and James 4:4 is important to remember since we can't be holding hands with the world and Jesus. These holidays & traditions a lot of us were brought up on has nothing to do with our father in heaven, is of the world and is only a distraction; please don't get caught up with it.

Realize that fiction by definition is "invention or fabrication as opposed to fact" along with other definitions out there and you want to be careful. I use to be a fanfic writer myself but I gave up a lot of things because a lot of it was related or connected to the world.

There is nothing wrong with writing but when you're writing about worldly things or fabricating stuff, you're putting yourself in danger since we're to walk in truth. Liars won't inherit the kingdom of God so you want to make sure you're speaking truth at all times.

Jesus told us at John 14:23-24 that if you love him then you'd obey his teaching. He also says at John 14:15 that if you love him then to keep his commandments.

I'd get away from fan fiction altogether, since it's only a distraction, and build a strong relationship with Jesus Christ since it's very important but that's a decision you will have to make for yourself.

Just know that all the issues going on in the world has already been foretold in the bible.

If you are awake and aware to everything going on, then please: seek the father in heaven while he may be found, repent of your sins, let go of this world and follow Jesus as mentioned at Matthew 10:37-38; majority of the things we need to know is in the Word of God so please read the bible for yourself. You don't want to be deceived since a lot of churches out there aren't doing what they should be doing.

Be aware that there isn't much time left but don't adopt the spirit of fear since greater is he that is in you than he who is in the world. You need faith since without it, it's impossible to please the father in heaven so never let the devil steal that or your peace. Just draw close to the father in heaven and he will draw close to you.

We've all fallen short so nobody is better than anybody and the heavenly father is very merciful. Just humble yourself, go to the father in prayer, confess your sins to him and repent. Mean what you say & repent (turn away or stop doing it) and he will forgive you.

Jehovah is the god of Abraham, Issac and Jacob but nobody comes to the father but through the son Jesus Christ so you want to accept and follow him since it's by his blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven.

A great deception is coming along with the antichrist and you do not want to take the mark of the beast. It's a chip that goes in your right hand or forehead. You can read about this in Revelation. Do not take this Mark, worship the beast or his image because if you do then you will end up in hell. Stay strong in Jesus. Only he can save us and he is a lot closer than people realize so be ready at all times and keep the faith.