I love this story! I can’t wait to read more, whenever you’ve got it! Awesome job! Bravo!

Great update! Glad to see you back at it.

Thank you for the update, hope to see a new chapter soon... a little faster then this update please (puppy face)

I had to go back to the beginning to catch up but it was worth it. It is certainly not a happy, feel good sort of tale so far, but it's got legs. I'd like to see where it goes. Chuck is going to have a lot of explaining to do when he shows up to spring Sarah. Maybe he's safer with her in there.

Thank god for the update
I do like your work

Nice to see you back!

Nice to see this story continuing.

Very happy to see an update! Love your stories hope you can continue!

It's good,to see this story come back with an update. I've missed,it. Chuck is going to need help with getting Sarah out.

See, I am so ridiculously curious as to where this story is going to end up. What is Chuck's big plan?

...and I'm actually digging the bromance between Bryce and Devon. It's fun to see two characters that don't typically play off of one another get to interact a bit.

Anna was definitely too harsh with Chuck. Even though I understand her desire to protect Morgan (just like Sarah would have tried to protect Chuck) he wasn't wrong when he pointed out that they volunteered. No one twisted their arms to get them to come along, and it wasn't right to throw that in Chuck's face after the fact. I'm glad he at least got a moment to talk with Morgan and say goodbye

Happy this updated again so fast. Hope that's a sign of more to come!

I love that Anna gets on her high horse considering that it was her and her moronic boyfriend wanting to play around in the gummint computers, against specific instruction, which created most of the havoc and almost ruined a serviceable plan. Without them being kids and tripping alarms, by being less capable than they thought themselves, there would have been no chase and no need to shoot Chuck.
Oh but so much satisfaction in the end of the chapter. First the two minute countdown annoying Casey for a good laugh and then a great scene with Chuck displaying to the asshole that he is not as all powerful and superior as he constantly acts. One of very few scenes in FF where the douche gets what he richly deserves - pity that Chuck is forgiving and feels he needs Casey.

Oh holy hell that was excellent! Love the banter between Awesome and Larkin, and the end? Wowza! Can't wait for more!

Still very exciting. Still don't really know what chuck is up to! Keep writing.

I've just reread this whole series, just to know what the hell is going on. Very intense stuff. Sarah really needs to blow off some steam.

What exactly is chuck’s plan with all this...