Creative backstory to the characters. It also captures that dangerous side of Jareth. Good job.

Such a sweet and sad story.

Amazing. I love your back story on the characters. It was a sad tale...but I enjoyed it. Thank you!

Adiyana. That is such a cute name. Does it really mean goodbye in some language, or did you just think it up all by yourself? This is such a good story. It's so sad.

I thought that was clever.
Truly different.

beautiful, simply beautiful.