| Reviews for A New Life |
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   DarkSorcerer888 chapter 1 . 12/17/2019 There’s also Orre, Alola and Galar. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2019 1000000 out of 10 I'm impressed almost 90000 words that more that some 13 chapter fanfiction I've read and it 1 chapter I loved it and would read aging keep up the amazing work |
| alexanderwhittington47 chapter 1 . 6/29/2019 I loved it it made me very happy I been betrayed before it hurt but I can relate so keep up the outstanding work and have a wonderful life |
| Golden Latios chapter 1 . 4/30/2019 I love this I read it every chance I get. like the fast pacing was good. Latias deserves to be with Ash. I wish she went with him during the hero movie. but this is better. and you showing that it is ok to be Gay. you are one of the coolest anthers I have read. |
| napsterman23 chapter 1 . 12/13/2018 great fic . hope there is a sequel to this fic. rate it a 9 of 10. :):):):) |
| Kai chapter 1 . 11/18/2018 Rhydon is not fire type so water is not super effective against it... l remember that rhydon is 4 times weak to water |
| Tilty.bbb chapter 1 . 9/25/2018 This was a fantastic read well done |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 this chapter is way to long next time try shorten it |
| bradleyjulian711 chapter 1 . 9/7/2018 This was the best fanfiction that I've ever read, it was honestly and truly an amazing piece of literature |
| DrackNath chapter 1 . 8/24/2018 this was a wonderful story to read :3 Thank you for this treat |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 I may sound harsh but why the fuck is Max telling Ash about the gyms when he knows about it himself? And why are the gym leaders handing out badges he already has? And you got the typings wrong and their advantages and disadvantages. Noivern is the weakest pokemon of Ash yet he can sweep quite easily teams of Elite Fours? And why isnt ash using Latias!? |
| AG chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 Nice |
| poggerz chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 Holy shit that was long, the type matchups were off but other than that this was awesome. I'm dying to know how long this took to type because, wow just wow. |
| Eris Fujin chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 you do realize you are getting the type match ups wrong, as well as a lot of the typings for certain pokemon, for example, lugia is actually a psychic flying type |
| Aren serathy chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 83 Thousand words...SWEET LORD I don't, have, the words. FOR HOW REDUNDANTLY LONG that is. All things aside even for a oneshot that needs to be split into chapters. Anything over twenty thousand words needs to be cut up to give not only an easier time on the reader, but to give you a smaller sample sise to proofread and correct along with any beta readers who aid you. It just simply isn't possible to maintain coherent quality with something that long. |
