Just barely found this. I love it. Although, I will say two things: 1.) it's weird for Tony to call JARVIS when JARVIS became Vision in Age of Ultron (which comes before Civil War). Tony would have had to call FRIDAY; and 2.) considering that Peter in this story is not breathing but he has a pulse, then Tony would not have had to do CPR (CPR is when the victim has no pulse and is not breathing). He would have done rescue breathing instead. I did extensive research on CPR and that's what I found. Other than that, great job, though!

Good story

This is really cool. You should write more of these !

I really enjoyed reading this :)

O_O I love it

Awesome! Part 2?

Fantastic! I was hoping someone would write about that scene! Part 2?

I feel like Steve would, like, stop fighting them if this actually happened.

I'd love to see this continued if you could !

Hey, I really enjoyed reading your take on things! I love the Peter and Tony relationship and would love to read more; it would be interesting to see where this leads. I hope you decide on adding more to this and if you do I can't wait to read it! :)

You should continue this, I haven't seen anyone else take this approach and it would really interesting to see it fleshed out more. Obviously, Peter's respiratory arrest changes how the story goes forward - Rhodey and Tony don't go after Cap in this scenario and then Rhodey isn't paralyzed. However, with this tradeoff Peter is the one that suffered most severely in the battle aftermath... I wonder how that would change things going forward. Especially since Tony brought him along - a 15 year old kid. You should try exploring what exactly happens afterwards in this version, there's tons of potential here! Also, going forward, how on earth is Peter supposed to explain what happened to Aunt May... given the severity she probably won't buy that a "kid" named Steve from Brooklyn did this to him. Great job on the first bit, hope you continue - if you need help brainstorming PM me!

Please post another chapter to this story! It is really good and I want to see Peter again.