This has a surreal feel to it that really draws me in. 10/10

This was a neat little story! Awesome!

This is beautiful. I love the use of colours, the atmosphere and the sense of peace and quiet created here. It seems like Kirby's planning to travel somewhere; hopefully he wouldn't leave Dream Land for good, right?

I don't know why but I'm always a stickler for stories that evoke stars and this kind of serene atmosphere. It must speak to the romanticism and a love for purple prose every now and then in me. :)

Awwww, this story is so sweet! :D Thank you for sharing it! I know it says complete, but I would love to see a full blown story on this, I think they idea has a lot of potential. Keep it up!