Reviews for Temptation's Flower (Book One)
WhitedarkWolf1 chapter 34 . 1/16
Oh! Esto se puso interesante y dejándome con la intriga... lo bueno es que no tengo que esperar por el 1er cap de Temptation's flower xD
I just realized that both comments I put in Spanish , sorry. by the way, enjoy the first part a lot and if the story was not a YoukoxKogome, it would be with Yuuta 3
WhitedarkWolf1 chapter 31 . 1/16
Te diré algo, eres cruel. Hiciste que olvidará completamente que la historia era Youko x Kagome y que me encariñara con Yuuta, esperando un Kagome x Yuuta, cómo sea, me encanta tu historia y espero con ansias la llegada de Youko 3.
setokayba2n chapter 35 . 1/3
In chapter 32, what happened to the village between the village and the Demon hunting? Kagome promised to visit after all...
Tahere-Ravenword chapter 28 . 12/2/2019
Ohmygod (A) I have totally become invested in yuuta x kagome! Please do a oneshot with them please, I love this pairing so much!
PondRiverWilliams chapter 36 . 11/2/2019
My new years is going to lit with this story updating!
Guest chapter 36 . 11/1/2019
I wasn’t expecting to hear from you guys so soon but I’m eager for the second part of the story! So you plan to make two story’s based off temptations flower? Interesting. So does that mean it won’t be tied to the original story then? I’m not sure how I feel about pairing kagome and satouru together but since you are changing him I guess it might be interesting to see how well they get along. So I’m guessing youko won’t make an appearances. Interesting. That’s okay because I love yuuta. I’m curious to see how different they will be especially since you are adding magic. I also love eacaflowne but I’ve never seen munto. As long as you aren’t making kagome into some sailor warrior girl like in sailor moon then I’m down!
Thisgirlreadswords chapter 36 . 10/30/2019
New stories?! I'm excited! I'd like to read them!

My favourite characters in Book One would be Yuuta and Kosuke. I like their interactions together, especially when it involves Kagome. I also like when Kagome was being motherly towards Shippo, Ume and especially the bandits haha XD.

For Book Two, I honestly don't know what to expect! And because of that, I'm eager to read it!

I'd like to see Kagome's brother being friends with Yuuko and finally meet Kagome in the Feudal Era. I remember Souta promised to bring her back from there in chapter 11. How he'll bring her back is what I'd like to know. Maybe he works with Yuuko and his team and gain some kind of power.

You guys did a great job writing this story! I'll be waiting for your new ones!
NightlyRowenTree chapter 34 . 10/18/2019
Go yuuta dont roll over and submit fight for your wifey
AmaryllisPsyche chapter 35 . 9/30/2019
All I can say is wow! I can’t wait for Youko to be introduced but I was so engrossed in this even without him in it. Great writing. I can’t wait for Book Two :)
IenaellaIris chapter 35 . 8/4/2019
Well, this was an excellent read and I can't wait to see the rest of the story.
IenaellaIris chapter 31 . 8/4/2019
I sorta want Yuuta and Kosuke to find love somewhere. Like you've made these super sweet and completely different men who are respectful and it is so freaking amazing.
IenaellaIris chapter 18 . 8/4/2019
JESUS, I WAS ABOUT TO BE UPSET. I MEAN I'M STILL UP USPET. THIS MAN NEEDS A DEATH.
IenaellaIris chapter 2 . 8/4/2019
This opening is beautiful, you have some realism but this definitely feels like fantasy! Love it so far!
IenaellaIris chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
So in chapter 1 the Gonzo Fal Bar is open since 1998, but in the next chapter it’s 1990 I think you have a time error. Interesting so far. I’m not sure how this applies to the story so I’ll see you in the next chapter.
kimmico chapter 35 . 7/10/2019
So this is the end of book 1 I see.
Damn. But this was so thrilling. What a way to end it. Or to be continued.
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