This is a very great story and I couldn't stop reading until I realized that I have read all that was out for it. I love Black Lagoon and I enjoyed how you wrote the story and characters.

story went from being decent to mommy help me lvl up real fast.

The best time to negotiate is always breakfast or brunch

I found this chapter hilarious just the concept of them negotiating about them faking there death over bacon and eggs without them trying to shoot each other

Sorry I can't offer much in this review all I can say is I still enjoyed reading your story and I still will read your story until the end

Keep up the amazing work can't wait to see what happens next

I like this chapter I can't offer much in this review since I'm not the best for critiques all I can say is keep up the amazing work

No one could ever have one good night for a birthday without someone getting shot or killed

And a restaurant that has only been shot up three times I think the only reason it's so low is because two hands has never been there before

I think you updated the wrong story. XD Shit happens.

I'm happy with the new chapter I think it's going off what the original story was about I know it can't all be about rocks love life it's just these new characters through me off for how sudden they were put into the story and how much information was provided for the backstory for them

Frederica is going to be VERY happy. Rock is going to have fun.

I'm really happy that you updated and with a interesting chapter

I pity any person who dares wake up two hands and tells her she lost may God have mercy on their souls

With all these new players coming to the city I'm wondering how much the body count is going to increase

Little curious will fry face have a job for Sawyer and lagoon company somewhere down the line

New players in the fun city of Ronaper

I hope they work with fry face

out of the 3 bosses in the city she seems the most interesting to work four

Keep up the amazing work sorry I can't offer much in this review

They say once in a blue moon the yellow flag won't get shot to pieces when the lagoon a company goes for drinks this was one of those moments

Thank you for the new chapter keep up the amazing work

Are you love your story

I didn’t expect them to jump in to such an intimate moment right after someone’s death I kind of laughed after that moment

Sorry I can’t offer much in this review I’m not the best all I can say is keep up the amazing work

Nothing says romance then a little bit of murder and then sex

something I find frightening and yet exciting at the same time

I am happy that you're back with a new chapter and I cannot wait to see what happens next keep up the amazing work