I've read this one and is one of my favorites.
The problems are
1 - It's not finished
2 - it doesn't show up under Ranma or Ah My Goddess (I had to search for it)
3 - It's a very good story but the Angel and The Rose gets pretty silly.

I checked over all of the chapters on the site using firefox and they all seemed to be different from each other. I am not sure why you are seeing double posts.

This and the previous chapter seem to be double posts of the previous two chapters.
Think you will ever get around to fixing this?

For some reason I can picture the lullaby sung to Ranko being...

"Soft kitty, warm kitty little ball of fur
Happy kitty, sleepy kitty purr purr purr"

I hope you are still planning on writing the second book in this fanfiction story, I know it has been a few years since you finished this one but I and many of your other readers would really like to read it. Especially because I want to know if Urd was able to save and bring her husband and daughter back from the world they were trapped in by the evil demon happosai.

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Loved this fic years ago, and just enjoyed the reread. Hope your still around some place.

I gave up midway through this chapter. I'd tried to stick with it but it kept getting harder to read and too mixed up. No idea what the story is anymore.

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I tried. I got this far, but I just can't finish it. This is just so hard to read. Everyone just seems so dead and lifeless. They feel less and less like real people the longer this story goes on.

The "romance" between Kasumi Ranma and Hinako seems SO incredibly forced? Where are the obstacles? Where are the trials and challenges for them to overcome? Every time it looks like something is about to happen to give them some challenge and make it interesting for once something comes along out of nowhere to conveniently prevent anything from happening.

Ranmko and his relationship with Nabiki is SO incredibly forced. Not only that but the Ranko character is not even remotely interesting and doesn't appear to have any bearing on any plot or... anything for that matter in this story.

The flashbacks and dream sequences after a very short period just end up becoming annoying to read.

My advice would be to come up with an idea on where you want to go and plot it out. Even if you don't know how you're going to get there you should at least have a destination in mind. Decide what does and does not need to be there to progress the story and plot and remove the stuff that isn't important. Give the characters some physical and emotional obstacles for them to overcome. It's not interesting to read if nothing happens.

Also if you establish a timeline on something be careful to stick with it. I noticed that when Ranma and Hinako were in their little coma bubble that you regularly would note that there was a certain amount of time left in the process, and then you would have several days go by and then when you mentioned how much time there was left for the healing process there would still be several days left. You over shot your wake up time no less than twice.

Your dialogue needs to to be heavily cleaned up too. There are so many issues with it.

The chapters are also way too long. I'm not usually opposed to long chapters in a story especially if it's good, but every chapter in this feels like it takes forever. Mostly because the content just isn't strong enough to keep someone properly invested.

The whole goddess thing also seems really REALLY forced. Becoming a goddess seems like a pretty big deal. The fact that Kasumi and Ranma are just randomly handed their godly status is preposterous. That seems like something that really should be earned. Again this goes back to the obstacles point. It's not interesting if everything gets handed to these characters on a silver platter.

Anyway, if you ever would like to talk more in depth regarding this story feel free to PM me. I do like some of the core concepts, I just feel like they weren't handled well.

well, here's hoping that this review finds you well! I must say, I have seen this story listed on quite a few times, over the last couple of years, as I have looked for Ranma fics to read, but it didn't really catch my attention, but finally I decided to read it, and I must say I am glad that I did! I rather enjoyed it! I hope that you will continue the side story for angel and the rose, and also continue the side story explaining Kasumi (Katrina's) and Ranko's journey's! I only have one complaint that threads through the entire story, and that is spelling, wording, and missing or wrong words, but hey, no one is perfect, and I simply switch things around to make the sentence make sense! I also noticed some continuity error's, but can't remember where they are at this point! I am not flaming you for those problems, merely pointing them out to you, so when you have the time in the future, and also the inclination, you might want to see if you can fix those problems...if not, then I will still enjoy reading this story! I think that is enough said at this point, besides saying I look forward to seeing what you are going to put Athena through regarding her punishment!

Great story so far. Iluaghed out loud when you mentioned the swamp people. That was great work brining all those anikes and shows togehter. I really hope that you continue to write you have a gift.

Incredible story good job!

I would like to point out that Ranko is an incredibly effeminate name and I am getting no end of amusement from the fact that you have bestowed it upon a male character

Did we miss you? Well yes, I first found this fic years ago and its one of my favs. There are not many Ranma/Hinako fics, and this must be the only Ranma/Hinako/Kasumi. That you're back and updating is great beyond words, so yes, very glad to see it at the top of my favs again!

Thanks for writing and sharing. :)

ps i leave a signed review if i'm signed in, otherwise i'm always rune tobor.