Read this first before the main story because why not! But I have to say I’m looking forward to getting into the original. Your writing, set up, characters, are superb. Especially loved the small bits you took from the DBZA Trunks v. Cell fight. Really demonstrates how god teir Kotaro is. Can’t wait for more! Keep it up!

"And Nickname Pending". Hillarious!

glad to see that you updated!

Sorry, ignore that review.

That's kind of spoilers right there, WriteFiction.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Mdhunter here. Wow. Really wasn't expecting the threesome lemon. But I'm not complaining! Anyways, please continue with the next chapter soon. Looking forward to it, and have a nice weekend. :)

Cool. Keep it up!

Cool. Keep it up!

Fuma Kotaro is obviously, extremely strong. However, Minato mentions that she is marginally stronger than Hashirama and Madara. However, would she beat Madara with the Sage of Six Paths power? If the answer is yes, then that's puts her in the league with Adult Naruto and Sasuke and canon(seriously, those guys are fucking STRONG. Dodging things at light speed? Splitting a moon in half? Destroying an object as big as a mountain by hitting a body into it? Naruto and Sasuke in Gaiden and the blank period are insanely OP, and is stronger and better than Madara and Hashirama as people). However, great story so far and it certainly captivates me and keeps me reading. I look forward to the next chapter.

that was good keep the chapters coming