| Reviews for Years Lost |
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GoliathPyroson chapter 1 . 6/21/2019 Of course Jackie'd like pics of her boyfriend's 8pack |
Gallifrey denizen chapter 2 . 5/4/2019 i loved this way more than i should great work |
allman08 chapter 2 . 10/6/2018 Welp. I love it! I wish there was more, but i leave that up to you! |
FleksAndru chapter 2 . 10/19/2017 Very nicely done |
Princess Regia Al chapter 2 . 7/19/2017 I really like this story, it could easily pass as cannon. I do have a question though: Did any of Marco's flings produce children? |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2017 Pls coutinue it's super good |
DragonCoyote chapter 2 . 4/6/2017 Hello. Looks like it has been a while since you upload this, but i just finished reading. I like it so much! Marco is little... bad, maybe because the age LOL. This chapter is the best, I like the whole situation with Jackie, she is so hot, and I think that Marco still like her, but since he is 30 now, he feels ashamed of himself, thinking he is a sort o pedo. Hope that you can upload some more chapters soon, greetings. PS: sorry if the grammar is bad, I'm not really good with english. |
KingOfAnime117 chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Good progression of Marco and Jackie. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
duskrider chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Nice I rather like how the nature of Marco's jokes shows how he has grown and I really agree that in this Marco likely moved on in his 16 year away from home. |
RandoPasserby chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Thought provoking, and pretty funny regarding that 2nd chapter. It's a shame that they don't do more with something that could give Marco's character soo many options moving forward. Hell it could even be its own spin off series. |
AstralWhip chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Hey there, I am happy you decided to continue the story. Will this be a series of one-shots about Marco handling his new life? I liked how Jackie decided to support him by giving him some space and also she was interested in his sexual life. I liked the joke at the ending by the way. |
ADdude chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 I liked it, interesting take on how Marco would explain the years that went by to Jackie. Well done. |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Nicely done, and the slight mental regression actually makes sense when you look at it. |
evolvelove chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 why men? :( i really your writing you do know how to write the characters! it will be awesome if you continue this, it was funny, hot *wink *wink and above all it really makes sense! keep writing and evolve more! pdta: maybe a hekapooxmarco next time? really want to see how you write a new encounter between these two. |
Gold Testament chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Change the rating to T at least. Yeah your omakes in the two chapters you've done for this... I don't think they can be considered that. I mean it's too easy to make them part of the main story. Besides a real omake would've been showing us how Janna knew what Marco was talking about let alone knowing Jackie would wind up staying awake thinking about it. |