Reviews for Homecoming
GrumpyCatLilBub chapter 1 . 6/15
The last chapter made me cry! This book is amazing and I hope others can enjoy it just as much as I do. Please continue making story's for all to enjoyGrumpyCat~}
Destiny Willowleaf chapter 14 . 2/21
'kay so I just read all your Chaotix backstory fics in one sitting(and most of the recommended one at the beginning of this fic for context) and it was a lotta fun! Obviously dark but still just a "kick-back-and-enjoy-the-madness" sorta thing, ya know?
I dunno if the Vector one's gonna get any more updates but I'm curious to see where it'd go.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/5
That was a really good story, and that ending got me crying! You did really great! Sorry I couldn’t type better, but I can’t see through all the tears. You did amazing!
SWcreeperProductions chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
May I PM you? Please?
SWcreeperProductions chapter 14 . 4/5/2019
I am in awe. This fanfic has been the best piece of literature I have read in a long time. It had suspense, it had darkness, but most importantly, it had happiness. I loved the ending, I loved the beginning, and I loved the climax. Basically, I loved the whole fanfic. Team Chaotix is really underrated in the Sonic franchise imo, and I'm really glad someone has dedicated a whole, interesting fanfic about them, especially Espio. To be fully honest, at the climax I actually had goosebumps when Espio had panic attacks from Bryce, Espio and Charmy getting held hostage, and when Vector rescued them. There's probably more moments when I had goosebumps. In conclusion, thank you for this fanfic. You have done an outstanding job on this. Many other people, not only me, really liked this, as you can tell. Furthermore, excellent fanfic. I loved it, once again, and I hope to see more in the future.
TheLastoftheRealOnes chapter 14 . 3/25/2018
This story is incredible. A little dark, but honestly, in my mind, most Sonic the Hedgehog characters would have darker pasts. So in that aspect, I really appreciate this fanfic. Also, Espio is one of those characters that gets undermined a lot, even though he probably has the greatest skill set out of all the side characters, so I absolutely love the fact that you made him and the Chaotix the center of the story! And to top it all off, you write extremely well for a Fanfiction author, which makes reading your stories all the more enjoyable.

I guess what I'm getting at is, you're an awesome writer, and this story is one of the best I've read. Never stop writing! You've got skill!
Kayla chapter 14 . 6/3/2017
I cried thanks for this story it was amazing also I'm the same person who commented on the other website this made me emotional and I may have woken up my parent while screaming for Esp to beat the crap out of Bryce but I don't regret reading this best story 10/10
mangle chapter 14 . 5/29/2017
This is the best story i have ever read but you could make another chapter of espio visiting his master and Cori or Bryce in jail
PiscesProditionis chapter 1 . 5/15/2017
Sorry that I haven't been keeping up with everything! It's certainly deserving of it, but school's been hectic. My apologies!
This has been an amazing story and I'm glad to feel a sense of closure towards Ms. Jenna's story. Thank you for putting your time and work into making this. This is very well written and entertaining. You do the serious parts well and the humour in lighter parts is so clever that I almost didn't believe somebody could think of it at times. Thank you.
PiscesProditionis chapter 10 . 3/26/2017
Once again, you've delivered a great chapter! I feel like I'm getting repetitive with my reviews, but I really want to get the message across that I think you're a phenomenal you for writing!
PiscesProditionis chapter 9 . 3/24/2017
I'm so glad that Charmy's safe! And I wasn't expecting that from Espio. Happy to hear that this isn't nearing its end just yet. I'm loving your writing style!
PiscesProditionis chapter 8 . 3/19/2017
Oh man, I was hoping for an answer to the cliffhanger last time, not an amplified cliffhanger! Now I'm in even more suspense
PiscesProditionis chapter 7 . 3/14/2017
Vector better come save them fast. If something happens to Charmy, I don't think I could keep reading. Poor babies...
Missplayer30 chapter 7 . 3/14/2017
It's great, you used my suggestion (not in the way I expected, but whatever), I can't wait to see more.
Missplayer30 chapter 6 . 3/11/2017
I'm liking it so far. I wonder if you consider to incorporate the whole species-related jokes, since it's the most obvious thing to put in this fic (Like those chameleon trying to eat Charmy by wrapping their tongue around him, or threaten to do so).
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