Noice. I finally got around to rereading this (to catch myself back up and such), and reading the new chapter now, I can really see how much your writing skills have improved; it's really cool! I feel like you've really gotten better at dialogue and the characterization. Can't wait for the next update!

Oh wow, it’s been a while since this has updated! Love the new chapter, and good luck with everything!

Amazing wonder how they will react in the next chapter

Don't worry about it if you don't get the chapter out next week, I myself only just started posting again because of the quarantine. There is no pressure, so long as you are proud of what you do. I'm very excited to see what you have planned for this though. -

So glad to see you back! Can’t wait for next week, seeing as you did so well!

my name biiiiitch. I AM THE BUS DRIVER, so nothing else matters in that context.

"A few months" not that I'm saying anything bad, you have a reasong and ur spark is probs gone. But i just wanted to reming you if you forgot. I hope ur not ded bye

Please update your story soon!

Wtf this aint mabel this is her evil twin she wont Do that

I SAW THIS UPDATED AND I WAS SO HAPPY YOU DONT EVEN KNOW.

Make more please it's been two years!

Thanks for the chapter and please keep up the good work (-)

Oh Mabel you poor stupid little girl you're going to die.

It's my name. Nice try but I already heard of this before.

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