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OMG! "You've proven yourself quite the genius young man" I'll have you know I was reading this at night and I legit snorted so loud I heard my brother being like wtf?! This is such a great story! I love Rika, she's so cool! I love the relationship between Hotaru and Midori, as well as Hotaru and Haruki, since I lowkey ship the latter but I ship Midori x Hotaru way more it's my otp. I love this story so much and it's made me smile and laugh so much that I wanted to leave a review.

Also, in this chapter, I noticed that there was a big block of text and there was a sentence which seem to be missing a word which is when Midori puts Hotaru on his bed there was this sentence "Hotaru's hair flowed around her like as she took in rapid breaths", there seems to be a word missing between like and as to describe how her hair flowed around her. Other than the layout and simple mistakes like that, I would say this story is quite splendid and a joy to read.

About the layout, it seems to be paragraphs, which kind of make it look daunting to read, especially for people with dyslexia and stuff like that, so if those paragraphs were split into smaller sections and if the conversations was written like,

"Midori-san I love you! Now let's get married and have kids", said Hotaru.

"Of course, Hotaru-chan, how many kids are we talking about?", Midori asked.

( If only they would say that! Kyaaa!)
It would really help a lot with reading it as well as make the chapter look and feel longer for the readers as a bonus. Anyways, sorry for the super long review but I just really liked this chapter so I wanted to share my thoughts on it. Best of luck on the rest of your story and any other stories you are currently writing! I'll eagerly be anticipating the next chapter and thank you so much for taking the time and energy to write this wonderful story!

xoxoxoxo

You write some quality content.
Hope you continue!

Aaaaaaa...
It's TOO Cute ~
uhhh.. I'm really Love it. even the next time will be have some trouble..
*maybe*

Nice...

This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! You do a great job on keeping the characters in line, and the plot completely absorbs the reader in! I love the character development between Hotaru and Midori and not to mention Masahiko. He's a schemer, so with this ending, I can only imagine what the battle will be like between Hoshishiro and Inferno. Keep up the good work!

HOTARUxMIDORI forever!

Midori better stick near his Hotaru. I don't like the other guy.

I LOVE THIS ️ Please give me more of this goodness. We need more of Midori. I just love him

Me encantó espero que actualices pronto figthing -

Soo Hotaru is a police huh? Well I guess that does make sense considering her thirst for justice and Kane being a police too.. why does that "Masahiko" or something name sounds so familiar, hmmm..

Ese Masahiko es de cuidado. Estoy interesada en ver como se desarrolla esto.

I love this story :3