This is great!

I was about to say "Yo, this is awesome!" and then realized the context behind that first word. Lol! But still, I'm really enjoying reading this, and I am awaiting the next chapter! Patiently, of course.

I love the way you wrote this story. Gladion always seemed like a criminally underdeveloped character in Pokemon Sun and Moon, since most of the story's focus was on Lillie. But you expanded his story and provided background that I never would have thought of (the reports on the Type: Nulls, Faba's notes, the text messages). It seems...real. Silvia, Cross, Steel, Usagi, and Gladion all seem real.

Sorry it took so long to review this, didn't have a whole lot of time to read. But I really adore your way of depicting characters. I can't really say there's a single character that I don't find interesting. I eagerly await the next chapter. But take all the time you need, quality over quantity after all.

This chapter was incredible, plain and simple. Your story is original, it is emotional and so well written that it makes me think about it well after I read it. Thanks for writing this, I can't wait for the final chapter, with what you've done so far, I wouldn't be surprised if you somehow make me cry when you finish this series.

Phenomenal story. You've captured the emotions perfectly, and you feel so much for each and every member of Gladion's team. I don't think it's an accident that the majority of his team in the actual games evolve through high friendship.

I named my Crobat Cross as well. I smiled when I saw that.

Excellent job. I eagerly await more.

This chapter was definitely worth both the wait, and the read. I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens next!

GOD THIS IS AMAZING.

I absolutely adore how in-character everyone is. More mature fics—whether it be darker or more emotional stories, or ones with smut involved—tend to really not give the characters justice, or make them a little too different from their canonical counterpart. Most of this occurs through constant swearing or having a trait or two of theirs (Guzma’s insecurities over his past, for example; yes, he’s hurt and has an inferiority complex, but he’s still quick to anger and destroy things which instills intimidation and respect from his underlings, and goofs around sometimes and causes trouble, too) exaggerated and given too much focus when the original source material managed to balance out all sides of them pretty evenly. You captured Guzma pretty well, on that note.

I never thought I needed to know Gladion’s backstory in detail, but now I’m fully invested. I always thought it was a missed opportunity that Gladion was never seen directly interacting with or aiding Team Skull in any of the 7th gen games, so seeing them work off each other and how well you managed to justify how he got in.

I found this fic through an ad you or some anon posted on 4Chan; a place I rarely ever visit, and a place I ever /want/ to visit. I understand how important reviews can be when it comes to giving you the drive to keep going, so I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate this fic and your writing style and how much I’d love if you continued this all the way through. It honestly inspires me as a writer to make more accurate stories of my own.

This is amazing! I love the personality you give everyone and I can't wait to see where it goes!

One of the best stories I've seen on this site.

I love the perspective you have with Gladion, your skills in writing have made his struggles come to life. Reading so far, you've put an enormous amount of emotions that seem real in the story, and you've highlighted a time frame that isn't talked about regarding Gladion. It is a beautiful story and I can't wait for more chapters to come.

This is so...so... so pure! (*ິ {} ີ)
I love how this whole story has been carried out so far ,
I can't wait for the next update !
I hope it hasn't been abandoned, you've created one of the more interesting stories with these two!

This, this fic is beautiful. I feel happy, good, as Gladion makes progress, and interested as to what'll
happen next. And the ending of this chapter is tearjerking.

Wow! I was in the mood for a close Pokemon and trainer friendship, (nothing creepy...not into that XD) and it looks like I found it! This has been an amazing read, and I can't wait till you update! The twist where you put reality into the Pokemon world isn't new, but making Silvia an actual "wild" animal, is interesting. Gladion had to gain her trust, and had to slowly introduce her to the outside world. They both are traumatized from their experiences at Aether, and both have their ways of coping.
It honestly took me reading this fic and actually LOOKING at pictures to realize that Type:Null really doesn't evolve into Silvally, it just removes its mask and cleans itself up. XD

This is brilliant. This may be the best Pokemon fanfic I have ever read. I love it!

It's a very compelling story about Gladion and Type: Null. A beautiful portrayal of how their friendship developed.

I'm not good with constructive criticism, but as far as I could tell there are no notable errors. Everything looks fine terms of grammar and spelling.

Your chapters are extremely long in comparison to what I'm used to, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Nothing in your story felt unnecessary or out of place and I actually really enjoyed reading the story.

I would love to see more updates to the story. It's pure brilliance!