Reviews for Flights of obsidian love |
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IllusionMaster17 chapter 20 . 5/30/2017 Short but awesome! And cute! I'll be waiting the book 2. Nice job. :) |
IllusionMaster17 chapter 19 . 4/21/2017 (Like the asdfmovie guy) -My story will include no fighting, limits on their love, ETC... Pure romance and erotic moments. -You lied to me... |
IllusionMaster17 chapter 18 . 4/6/2017 What?! WTH?! |
IllusionMaster17 chapter 13 . 3/13/2017 Interesting... |
IllusionMaster17 chapter 8 . 2/28/2017 Ohhhh, Flame is the bad guy. Interesting |
coincidencless chapter 4 . 2/12/2017 Your prose is very poor. For starters, there are next to no details of the setting. You always tell instead of showing. Furthermore, whenever you change speakers, you HAVE TO start a new paragraph. It's not optional. |
FR Shoot chapter 2 . 2/8/2017 Short but good |