Awesome so far

Great story, hope it continues some time.

Please continue it's a great story and I would love to read more

Awsome chapter love how you write neo

Awsome chapter this should just be made to it's own series I hope it just keeps continuing

You know, I’ve always been a supporter of the Lancaster as a ship for Jaune but if I had to pick a second one it would be Jaune and Neo (my crack ship as people call it).
People would laugh at the idea of Jaune and Neo ever possibly connecting in anyway but even in a non ship way they both have a connection to losing something dear to them because of Cinder (a common enemy). I wish we got more out of Neo than what we have, her just following cinder feels like a joke right now.

Anyway interesting story so far, I do like this kinda ‘what if’ scenarios.

Enjoyed this chapter a lot. It's hard to find relatively chaste RWBY fanfics. keep it up, I'd love to see No react to Jaune's new haircut.

Romance is unrealistic. Nobody falls in love like this

I knows life can get incredibly busy at times but I sincerely hope that this story continues amazing writing

noice.

Please update soon! I’m really liking where the story is heading. Keep writing.

hi!, I was wondering when are you going to update your story I want to know what happened with Weiss

That was great. I'm so happy Neo appeared in volume 6

WOOOOOO!

So I like this story but if Neo is writing her responses down there really doesn’t need to be ellipses. You would use that for dialogue but if someone was writing they would just gather there thoughts before writing the next word.